better than before, lose the line through the O and just play with making the letters more consistent
Aww the line through the o is my steez lol. I will see what it looks like without. Thanks so much for the crits. Its nice to have people actually help instead of just saying you're a toy.
jerman I put a ER at the end to spice it up a bit... not too happy with it but I think its got potential. Thoughts?
I dig it, but bring down the left leg of the A, its doin somethin weird to the overall balance and makes the A look like a 4, maybe do the same with the M, its less noticeable in that though
Hip3: Your b's are inconsistant up top and the bottom is booty. All the letters are boxy, but the a. Your d and b (seeing as they are nearly the same letter.) should be more uniform. Keep it up though you're makin' headway.
mone-thats clean and sick, nice suttle drips too hipe i like ur first B with the boxy top, if u made the A match it it would be dope. nice write though it looks good