dont bother with forcefield just focus on the letters

 

Blackbook ISHO. Practice everyday and keep progressing your letters. I know it gets annoying hearing everyone saying "blackbook,blackbook,blackbook." but its the truth. Anyone can pick up a can of paint and spray on a wall, but it takes true heart to progress and get better. A big problem i notice in your tag is lazy fill, terrible shading, and a very uneven outline. Like i said, practice in your blackbook for a while before you go bombing again. Because what you threw up right there looks incredibly toy. With practice, your letters will flow, and you will learn how to paint. (And when doing your fill, go either left to right or top to bottom and stick with it.)

 

let me help dont pay 10 15 for a blackbook so u can doodle toy shit in it get notebook paper its cheap

 

yeah dude, fill up at least 2 lined notebooks. the cheapest ones.

and ash, dude your throw up looks just as bad as his. no hate. just pointing out my brutha

 

wait why is isho bombing?
if you started amonth ago get some style first then bomb
SAVE PAINT

 

ok why in the hell is someone telling a toy to bite yo wtf are you doing!

 

bump for crits

 

Only 1 and half weeks worth of work, any crits?

 

make all the letters the same size and get rid of the detail inside of the leters make it simple

 

dont quote the shit right above you, looks kinda sped when you do that.
vex- get rid of those swoopy sword shit on the letters, you can do whatever you want in the fill, but make the E upper case and the same size.
ozone- i dont got crits for that, just practice it alot and post up whatever you come up with.

 

?? Anyone?

 

My bomb

 

The E and R are too separated and the O looks like a U. Pretty bomb ass S though, nice job.

 

super quick shit

[Broken External Image]:http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/6914/imag0141k.jpg

can was almost empty so dont mind the fucked lines

DECREW

 

thanks Ace.K,i will post new later

 

new

 

Definitely better. Did you make a new account from haezr? You both go by Eros.

 

i am Eros for now one jear
but i have respect and i will rename myself if second eros writing graffiti better and longer than i

i dont know english xD

 

Haha its all good man. Look for the user "haezr" on this site. Same name but I don't think he's been doing it for as long as you.