obvious and annoying. I doubt it will ever end, I just wish he would do it to some1 else already

 

heres 1 for sed . Wish i neva filled it after the outline :\

EDIT: had 2 go back on a few things.

 

You can do much better man, this is wack.

 

@cred, i clicked reply... didnt work i guess o.0 so to be "simple" should i just mess with straight letters more?

 

need some proper crits on this:

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tried going a bit further creatice-wise with my letters than the usual straights and simps... turned out, according to the intermediate counsil, I failed.

so hit me with some crits

 

i think venom is a good name to practice wildstyle with.

 

Nice style Venom!Maybe add some color to the 3d that might create some definition and make your letters pop.

 

i think the reason it failed is cause you tried too hard and didn't pay attention to basics. it lacks structure and the bars are inconsistent in size. also i don think those connections will help develop a good style right now. the fill is a cool idea but not ideal for a simp like this, should of left it all silver.

i think you should retry this but lean it all to the left, and not wiggle the bars so much, reduce it about half as much and make the bars the fatness of the O and bottom of the M.

its not your best, but its something to learn from definitely. hope this helped at all


crit to urs down there \/ \/
there is too much added to every letter. E is hidden and i really don't feel the NOM connection, i would make the O is own letter.

your round robin entry was on point. go off that.

 

and this?

 

the V and the E are the best. The left leg of the N is way too squished, as is the middle of the M. And the N to O to M connection is fairly wack. But the coloring is pretty dope.

this one is just overall wack. Not much else here i can crit.

 

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the M killed me

 

feel like your moving a bit backwards phat you've done way better

 

crits yo!

 

That first venom looks sick structure and colorS are dope

 

crits please?

 

seks, you're just butt hurt... get over it bruda

 

ok ok ... mayb ur right...i am pissed... but ur gunna tell me that that venom is anything less than garbage? lmao...

 

he doesn't have a cocky attitude like you. he is willing to improve. now shut up, fool