^dope, kick that L out a little more, the kick looks too dinky

 

i think my previous was much better, but here ya go ribs. My first attempt at a "real throwup"
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thanks klove, I like the third pic you posted

 

@klove that 3rd pics K is prime breh

@task o yup, that J is dope, try to take some of the negative space inbetween the R's legs

 

Truthfully, I'm feeling the first "K" that you posted. Try it with a "C" and see how it looks, then go from there. It looks good as Klove, but that's entirely up to you.
Blegh.

 

try moving the k/c back more so the l is less hidden?

 

klover nice name
your 3rd flick is the winner, everything innit's fine... the k too
I say you should stick to the k instead of the c
and please, refrain from flooding, try to bunch up all your flicks nd post them at once in the same reply

 

first throwup style I've ever tried, any crits would be appreciated

 

Crits please

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Crits please

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sorry about the flooding im new to this......ive been writing for 9 years though and im just now getting the touch of actually sticking with a name....and going slow...

quick one liner

 

No L :/

 

jester- i like the direction its going in but the R definatly needs work on the bottom 2 bars and the J might look better if it coincided with the S's style

 

excuse me? did you say one liner?
you got exactly 35 lines there son. I counted them.

now, who wants to explain to this 9-year veteran what's a one liner?

 

Haha I was going to say, you seem to have dropped the 'L' from the tag you did (which I liked aswell btw)
You seem to have a good handle on thing I'm digging the 'ADO' atleast, now you just need to get the 'L' in there aha.

Here's my noobrookietoy throw, first shot, I was mainly going for practicing my proportion and getting things level. I know the letters need work, but ideas on where would be greatly appreciated

 

All pretty poor, criticize please.

 

Yo Phat, this shit's a one-liner! Haha kidding of course.
And also just some boredom caused throw. Fucking with can control.

 

^not feelin that d at all, dot of the I could be a bit bigger as well. also the top part of the P should be bigget than the bottom and the line for the O should be more towards the middle of the letter IMO, like the color choices though

 

need to try get a flick of the face throwie got a nice spot with that

 

For the O, it's just the angle of the picture, it's actually in the middle in real life. Thanks for the crits though. These are all letters I don't have in my actual name.
And yeah, that D blows.

CLUMS - That S doesn't match the other letters. Turn that U's middle part upside down, it'll look better. The face is pretty legit though