You have no idea what your talking about. I don't add any extensions. If your complaining about extensions have you ever seen a wildstyle? Your saying the only painted simples I should see are in the city? Ever heard of the web? A flick just to post some work on this page. View attachment 546077 crits plz
thanks for the crits but i am currently an art major taking figure drawing this semester so i am studying human proportions and all that other fun stuff. the unpropotional head was on purpose but you'll notice pretty much all the other proportions are in order. i know my shits not perfect but i am working on it. i'm not tryna catch an attitude if it comes of like that just letting you know that i know what i needa do to improve. thanks again for the crits. chickens- why are you gettin so heated? like you said this is the internet so just deal with the crits and improve. dont go getting a big head like you're all that because the truth of the matter is you suck. doesnt matter how many corny tags you're throwing up it still doesnt make you a good writer. just keep working at it and one day you'll be able to tell kids whats good. until then just shut up and work hard.
View attachment 546078 didnt put an F in yet, had one, didnt like it, didnt work with the other letters. i realize the A playing card grows but it will look good once there is a letter next to it. crits? im not giving anysince there are no pictures on this page.
i'm really trying to develope my own style that's cartoony but in a realistic fashion. i like to base my characters off of how they would look in a realistic sense but then warp them into a cartoonish fashion as you can see with the simple eyes, mouth, and what not. as i said i havent perfected it yet but it's something im working on. edit* looks good black. will be a sickpiece if you can match an F to that style. only thing i would change would be where the top bars of the S and E meet with the lower bars... [Broken External Image]:http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/1562/dsc03459b.jpg i would say dont let those parts touch. give em a little breathing room and that piece will be dope.
Nah I know what you mean If you're majoring in art then you have alot more knowhow than I do Especially on the subject of characters Keep doin what your doin
yo black shit looks sick can't wait to see it done. your probably one of the most commited writers on here, by that i mean fastest progressed keep it up
safe that shits fire man. keep it up and one more thing to chickens since i was at work during the heated moments.....why are you pissed cats arent trying to dime out themselves? i mean just because we dont post EVERY SINGLE TAG we do doesnt mean we dont get up. you look like an idiot posting all your horrible tags and telling other people who have better handys to get up and away from paper. take the opposite of your advice and go back to the paper and make your shit look better. im done. dont argue back either. just post a word to handy battle with or improve your shit. FIN
BlacktodaFuture- I'm really feelin that S, your E on the otherhand doesn't seem to have as much movement as the S, its alot more rigid. If you can make the E more like that it's gunna come out fresh as hell. Rin5e- Watch your barsize, I'm trying to do that too and it's not easy at first but keep it up. The leg kicking out on the R doesn't flow with the piece either I would get rid of that. Name change, just trying to stay simple I really don't like my D, I'm trying to work at it. [Broken External Image]:http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/7536/lacrosse21.jpg
markingz shut up. as i read more of your posts i just see that you have no idea what you are talking about
alright guys, latelly theres been a lot of talk about what it takes to get past being atoy and whos intermediate and whos toy and why should you use bars and wtf are bars. so i pulled together some sketches from complete toy to recent to show progression for those of you that are wondering what to do from the point your at, hopefully you guys can pick out the different stages your at and clear up and confusion you might have. so yeah im a post some stuff right now and id appreciate it if no one interupts the flow of posts, cause there will prob be more than one. i wont take long so hang in there.
alright this was the complete toy stage, circa 07 when i thought i was the shit and that all i drew was straight burners. little to no bars, extentions and arrows everywhere. no good [Broken External Image]:http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/9418/screencapture17x.png [Broken External Image]:http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/4851/screencapture20l.png [Broken External Image]:http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/1357/screencapture16f.png [Broken External Image]:http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/7277/screencapture14.png [Broken External Image]:http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/3602/screencapture13.png [Broken External Image]:http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/1844/screencapture15.png
stage two the start of bars, nothing special letters wise some pieces are still over the top. however the structure is now more solid. this is the point where i started to almost understand bars and how to use them but payed attention a lot more to flow. [Broken External Image]:http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/293/screencapture25.png [Broken External Image]:http://img682.imageshack.us/img682/605/screencapture24e.png [Broken External Image]:http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/3818/screencapture22.png [Broken External Image]:http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/6384/screencapture23.png [Broken External Image]:http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/3818/screencapture22.png [Broken External Image]:http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/5331/screencapture21.png [Broken External Image]:http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/2951/screencapture19.png [Broken External Image]:http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/2607/screencapture18.png
stage three. bars are clear, i began to understand how to use them to build solid letters and not have the flow japordize the structure. late 08 early 09 [Broken External Image]:http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/3361/screencapture32.png [Broken External Image]:http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/4979/screencapture31.png [Broken External Image]:http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/5671/screencapture29.png [Broken External Image]:http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/6084/screencapture30.png [Broken External Image]:http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/3068/screencapture28.png [Broken External Image]:http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/3448/screencapture27n.png [Broken External Image]:http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/2885/screencapture26.png