the purple and pink combination looks better but both are good the star and the small arrow on the second one would look better with a shadow
thx man i hear u i need alot more practice but i did a quick thowies in summer school...What do you think i need to work on? [Broken External Image]:http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/2310/2b0fa9f29bafhn1.jpg Crits please
looks prety nice for a start just add somthin like color or shde so it brings out the picture...and the a needs some work
no stop...dont listen to wat he just sed^ the A is the best thing u have on that paper u can do somethin with that style..if anything all ur other letters need help.. ...ill try n help yall out if i can...work too much... LINK...STICK WITH THE FIRST r WHICH EVER i AND THE SECOND t and e... ...not bad man smooth nuts....wreckd the RITE...r n e are alittle off but still
polled the battle just need to wait for it to be approved....any one else wanna jum off on a battle while im still bored as shit? edt* finally a s i like
and...thanks for the crit bro..(fresh) yo -smooth- u did my second copy right...cuz i dont want the first copy in the battle
eack- not really diggin the overlappin squares thing, but if thats ur steez then just go with it not everyones gonna like it. its nice and clean just posted in another thread so i will only post one flick. edit: riot- i dont like it for some reason, idk it seems forced or somethin. maybe just sloppy View attachment 393333 crits
pretty much forced. i did it in like 2 minutes. so thats prob why. i like that throw. little sloppy looks like the can was low.
well here u go...sum simple.. [Broken External Image]:http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk90/dsilva25/2008_07300007.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk90/dsilva25/2008_07300008.jpg