i dont know just thought it gave it a lil more style and it makes it easyer to tell its an a but thats just me

 

drop the black space in the K. no other letter has it. make it just a line coming up and over.

 

toy throwup battle callout
Word:Evil
Deadline:March 15th
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts

pm your entries to smooth_nuts

 

werd i know what you mean s one

 

SNOT
you didn't take my crits man, except for the overlapping part.
LOSE THE HUGE HOLE IN YOUR O
THE BAR THAT CURVES BACK INTO YOUR S ON THE BOTTOM LOOKS LIKE A TUMOR, fix that shit.
your N is ew, but it's better than all the other letters? So just try out different letters if you'd like.

 

why tag is cops?
and if its a R , thats definetly looks not like one , more like T,P.

 

that se is from ma hood SI but i guess he got ups in NJ if u seen him,that pic of se omit and reph is in front of the movies i chill at

 

he did a capital R that he usually never does and i guess he fucked it up and it went with the S so it looks like COPS not CORS

 

snot- the bottom of ur s is lookn weird and the tops of ur n are kinda lookin pointy.
shayk. the bottoms of the AYK in the throw are all shorter than the first 2 letters. work on proportioning. sometimes i take a ruler and make 2 parallel lines and fit my letters inbetween em. practice that a lot and ull start to see em even out when u free hand it.

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yeah i dont get how to close off the s without making that thing come out

 

shayk - i say you take that dead space in the K away, maybe round your letters a bit more, but yeah its lookin pretty good
snot - change the S and take the big hole out of the O and change the T so it is more compact and doesnt look like an R
sizuuurp - they're good but they could look better, loose some of the huge bubbles and swirls

 

Eh kinda sketchy.Crits please!!Any tips for shadow?







Sizz-Shits tight,Just kinda hard to see what your name is
shayk-Make your letters more even/level
Snot-take advice given above

 

crits pls
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abstract?

 

i'm in need of a throwup, so bad. I just need a throwy L, anyone wanna do it up for me? just an L.

 

im pretty shur your gona have to do it your self. not to come off as an ass hole or any thing

 

im gunna come off like an asshole. DONT FUCKING ASK PEOPLE TO MAKE YOUR SHIT FOR YOU. SUCK IT UP AND DO IT YOURSELF YOU LAZY FUCK.

 

Crits?
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