id say go back to toys for a little jose whatever happened to perportions!

 

know what'd be dope is if u made that thing behind the n like a giant bag of cash

 

jose- shadings really off too. needa pick a light source. after you figure out a good light source you can add highlights to all the sides of the letters that are closest to that source and shade the parts that are furthest away.

 

ahhahah

and alt i like that its dope
but the little one on the end im not really feeling it
but the rest is dope

 

tight work alt, i think the N is a bit off tho

 

lookin better, but that N is weak the indent on the second doesnt flow with it

 

i see what youre saying. thanks for the crit.

 

thicker bars no can control

 

Thanks for the crits.... I know the 3d is really off its definitely something i have to work on. It says jeep but the cross bar on the j, i really wanted to try the thin connection i thought it would look cool.... Thanks alot though its good constructive criticism i know i can do better next time.

 

those thin bars are sick dude, not every artist has to use thick bars and imo it takes more skill to pull off some nice thin bars

good shit in the last couple pages glad to see people are improving around here, either that or the mods are actually deleting shit that doesnt belong lol

new shit, the patches are just covering up some shit ignore them

 

coffee? n ya thin bars do look sick as fuck pulled off just not that particular sketch.

your e and c are dope

 

nice patches

 

thanks, those are the leftovers until my pants deteriorate some more.

 

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some script shit i was fucking with last month

 

nice shit B.S. but because its cursive script your M should probably have one more thick leg rather than that thin one or else it looks too much like an N, also i wouldn't have staggered the letters if you know what i mean its throwing off the flow a little

 

yeah that scripts all over the place

 

Oh shit this dude it back long time no talk negro. I'll hit you up on AIM sometime.

As for Crits

BS- You startin to rock with the Script now man. Its looks nice I think the M could use a little work but props on pullin it off.

Aever- You've come along way bro. I like how you have lil mini upside down crosses camo'ed into your peice adds a nice touch. I think you could have tried a lil sharper color for the highlights to make it pop you know. Cause the silver is nice but not as bright yo digg.

Kans-Nice simp man. Your N could use a lil work. But over all nice keeping the consistency of your piece going.

(Ya I think some of the mods are pullin through for us. But I have some ppl blocked in this thread so regardless I cant see what they posted. But the work is getting back up to par i think. I'm working on my 1st 2 pager. It might be sick idk just started it today.)

 

eeeeeeee leftover crack

 

"you know there aint no such thing as leftover crack"