hahaha, why.. i dont know, i drew the flower for a friend and it was in my blackbook so i just tryed to give it the graffiti feel i guess
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Who the fuck are you? Your letters are WEAK. You just shunned some really solid advice on how to IMPROVE. ''blaahh blahh i don't want to be conformist and standard graffiti..'' Guess what.. your work is STANDARD POOR TOY. There's nothin wrong with wantin to be different, but youre not and you never will be unless you take some constructive advice and improve your letters.
loki- listen to the crits. seriously i had real bad writers block recently so i took this pic and tried to design this around it without directly biting, apart from the a was a bit bitten. it actually helps a lot, way more than i thought actually [Broken External Image]:http://jasonburnz.files.wordpress.com/2009/12/aplus.jpg
View attachment 575776 res4- that piece you started in the bottom i dig a lot, cant wait to see it fully colored. weakfingers- those letters look nice and simple, something easy that would look good on a wall ( the backwards R is cute)
weak- i prefer the first r and the second u, looking pretty good sbal- keep working on the orange one, make the l more pronounced for one thing meph- did anyone else notice the name on the brains, that was a god idea just need clean up a bit. and i will never finish it. i have no pens only biros and one red colouring pencil. im to ghetto for that shit
I like this. It's a cool concept. Would love to see it at a crazier angle though, rather than front on. Like, lookin at the guy more from above, really seein the brain spewing out towards you, drippin n shit..
you. calm down. why cant she do her own shit without you bustin out the insults? you dont NEED to like it. Loki do yer thang
aspek u in chitown??? i cant see too much influence in ur sketch besides the A and the separate bar in the P... id like to see something from u that doesnt flare out at the bottom, like all ur letters always are thin on top and thick on the bottom, switch it up and maybe ull like what comes out... loki i dont like the wonky arrow extensions... if u dont like typical graff u dont have to go out and paint any... ill admit when i started painting i wanted to rock pieces and ive painted AND sketched a few wack pieces, but once u get serious about wanting to develop ur own style, u realize that u haveta go simpler to progress faster..... its just better to practice with simpler letters if u want to progress into ur own style and not constantly put up stuff no one likes to see... im not saying conform, i never would, but starting with the basics is just part of the game
Meph- Maybe try placing the letters as more of a part of the brain rather than a tumor sticking out the side...other than that it looks cool Sbal- try sketching keyborad letters using bars. If you need help with bars look at the new to graff thread. weakfingers- That belongs on a wall. pleasing to the eyes. Something I started for the Break battle, Only an outline for now b/c I might re-do it. The E, A, and K are alittle close because I started running out of page. View attachment 575837 Should I add 3-D and fill? or Re-do it with better spacing? also advice on the letters would be nice. crits?