Nice shopping cart neer that first one isnt even bad yo But you need to work on your R's cuz both of them could use some tweaking
thanks no sleep. Naked, What shopping cart? hahaha, thanks man, and i know the Rs need work, i wanna kick em out more and make the bottom bar that comes back in more symmetrical with the N's, but i always run out of space.
no matta who ya familys are everybody needs familys yall. sear, those balls had better be gobstopers a somethin close 2 a jawbreaker
diggin that 1 tempo looks nice and clean keep it up man crits please changed the o up like suggested and I know its a little sloppy
Gettin there hype. id say drop the 3d for a drop shadow or just a bold outline, and id take those little cuts out of the inside of your letters where the top bar of the k conects and the bottom of the o and the p and r. and i don know how i feel bout the o looking fat like that. try a more old school looking o, kinda like a flat topped tear drop shape if that makes any sense.
word Ill try that out man ... as long as I am progressing atleast somewhat it helps. thanks for the crits man
before u guys start telling me about structure u should know that this was just for fun and yes, i know the letters r all wack,
hipe- i like your P and R but not really feeling the K. try to make the dip thing on top of your p more suttle like it is on the R. the 3d looks off at the bottum of your P and the bottum left leg of your R but it looks good elsewhere. you know with ur P and R how at the top it has the dips, maybe in the centre part of the 2 letters the 3d should have the dip too if you get what im saying, may look better but i donno, could fuck it up too but maybe try it out. EWL- i think that looks dope haha its a cool idea for sure.
sear top ones dope, could do without the A pms ing all over the place bottom ones dope as fuck too, but that tounge is flat as fuccck
I'm not digging some of my follow through lines on my bars. It looked a lot better with pencil shading but fuck it. Drips are ugly too, can I get some critz on my letters? View attachment 625818
@Emune ^ He has a point. Also for your letters the bend in the bottom bar of the E looks wack. Those extra lines aren't playing into your flow at all, try to position them so they look more natural if ya get what i mean. @Dank So clean, damn good work. Freestyle messing around with some new colored pens.
@ sear - reminds me A LOT of Rime, still looks sick though @ Hipe - not really feeling the lines that cut in, otherwise looks solid, on the right track @ ewal - cool concept, looks like it was fun @ dank - i feel like you've got your simples down pretty well, why not try mixing shit up? @ emune - get rid of those lines cutting through @ cred - looks great for a freestyle, do you even need to be posting in the toy thread anymore? gotta start somewhere right? i get that this doesn't look great, but i do like the P tilted up and the E tilted down, crits appreciated