damn kwu thats the hottest shit i seent from u! cred keep chippin away at it mayn... watch how u close the ends of ur bars though, the bottom of that C really doesnt work out, and the D u lost form like u said... but also the bottom of the R how u pointed the bars like that kinda looks out of place... just try to make them rounded on the ends at first... or even just straight block letters oh yea and erbody go vote on the round robin in the battle thread! some nice entries so far...
My best yet i'd say. Had to try to color over a few mistakes but it just smudged... try to ignore that if possible.
@ cred - every post ive seen gets better and better, just shows im not practicing enough. keep it up, i want to see the same shading from the red piece in that one you just posted. @ KWU - looks awesome, keep it up @ dempo - really digging that one on the left, got any like that with color? @ doss - not that i'm one to talk, but keep working those simples, im just not feeling any of it
@notmike Thanks man, just taking peoples advice and applying it to each new one. struggled on the highlights on this one, not sure if too high or just confused. And another, again kinda fucked up the D. So frustrating.
trying to work on control with more "roundness", doing it WELL is another matter. @dank good work bro your characters inspire me but i also wonder who inspires u @cred really nice way of using your bars seems like your R and D are the weakpoints if anything. nice fills too
started this for my bf just throwin it in here gimmie some colors i was thinking rasta colors n then i thought maybe blue??? its just a black book soooo i dont think it matters much...
@Dempo Dope shading man. the kink in the top of the O is throwing me off a bit but the rest is sick. @Nana Looks nice. Maybe use a light blue for the fill? Trying more rounded bars. R came out looking a bit off.
Cred - Looking better, digging that C and D. Nana - I'd drop a cyan blue on that, or maybe even a pinkish red. I can't really tell from the pic, but that R might need a tad bit more definition. I'm reading DIPSA. Fucked the R. But meh.
i get it!!! but i think its cause its done in pencil. and i used a webcam. none the less, i agree tho my r looks shitty...
@Syn I don't think the R is bad. Only thing i see is mayabe space the W out a bit more or don't extend the bottom of the E as much. i wish i could do outlines as clean as you. Lost all flow whatsoever with the D on this one...
^^not even. cred, you should do some nice clean simples and get a lil better grasp on structure. don't get me wrong, not saying yours is horrible like some people... but it would help you develop your ish quicker. you are trying to do complicated things too soon and ittlll look whack if you don't gots some good structure
say whattt we gotta female in bs? haha ^^ diggen the guer one looks pretty good @ cred its starting to look like an o' again