lmao science, ive seen your letters before bro thats kind afuny evade becuase im not really feeling you shit either, this reminds me of another character you did like this with a mo-hawk, theres too much going on and its flat, your other circle guy was straight tho
Reminds me of another kid who used to do monkeys, i like your more though, if that fill was clean that would be dope, props still progressing
CEAZER; where the hell are its pupils? TOKE; Go stop by a craft/art store and find a "How To" book on cartoons and characters. No jokes, no offence, It could help you a lot with humanoid karaks. Body structure, hair, eyes, hands. No shame in using one to help yourself along. Your progressing, but its slow. I'm sure looking through one would give you a well earned boost. (I'll grab a photo of one I bought for my little brother, he digs characters.)
usually when i do pupils it doesn't look as good so its kinda goggles yanameen? and yeah i was running out of paint so my fill sucked next time will be better
[Broken External Image]:http://mail.google.com/mail/?attid=0.0&disp=emb&view=att&th=1187dbff34ca3449 haha i fucked it up so some things are off but just did a little quickie for the bro......(didn't take half as long as i thought it would) *crits would be appreciated*
Ceazer; I get ya, try working out some sunglasses. monkeys always look good in sunglasses. Toke; Pictures off the book I bought my lil' bro. Its really basic, hes only 8, there are better ones out there but just to give you a idea of whats in them. [Broken External Image]:http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/1138/p1010161sy1.jpg Body structure. [Broken External Image]:http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/6464/p1010162bu4.jpg Tips on how to make characters stand out, didnt even know that was in there... [Broken External Image]:http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9956/p1010163ig4.jpg
thanks man, i honestly might just buy that same exact book, everyione tells me i have alot of potential but i need some direction, im gonna go back to the lab and toil and prolly hit borders or the local book store tomorrow :] i appreciate you being really constructive wiht your criticism
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Although this isnt a bad idea, i myself have never used one of these books in my life. sure you progress a lot slower, but you will DEFF get your very own style that no one can duplicate, and something that people will recognizae right away. like, look at me. im not perfect, but im not too shabby either, and i deff have a recognizable style. In my personal opinion, you will progress in more of your own direction if you just keep drawing, keep experimenting, and just keep pushing yourself. anyway, its not a bad idea, as many people look at these to get a boost, but i think it will deff take away from your style. just my opinion. heres something i did recently and dont think i ever posted...
Cheese; I never used them either. I just figure that toke could use something like that to build a good foundation to grow on.
I think I'm kinda likin' Juicee's Bus over there. I like where it's going actually, not often that you see a bus being used for a char. (But seriously, don't use cans, it's really lame, bro)
ahh forreal, i thought i drew it pretty tight tho lol i came up with a bus when i was tryna draw my brother this thing from the movie Cars lol thanx for the critss :]]]
Yeah man it was cool and all, just don't make it a can. That's kind of cliche, if you know what I mean (as in, over used)
Hey, this is my first time putting up some work here. I'd like some crits please, I'm really new to graff, and looking for some pointers in the right direction. It would really help a lot, thanks!