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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. M3KA1!

    M3KA1! Elite Member

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    like i said. ill try postin it thurr but if it gets deleted i wont feel too horrible
     
  2. funhouseXcast

    funhouseXcast Elite Member

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    memphis have you even posted any pics yet or are you just starting shit with everyone who'll give you the time of day?
     
  3. IllLogic

    IllLogic Senior Member

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    no your not
     
  4. M3KA1!

    M3KA1! Elite Member

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    no im not good enough or no im not still toy?
     
  5. IllLogic

    IllLogic Senior Member

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  7. Etcha

    Etcha Senior Member

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    Yeah I got a littlew bit sloppy on the 3D. Any suggestions to what parts need work?

    Thanks, I know the extensions are iffy. And could use some serious though. You said "watch your bars"? what do you mean? the width or consitancy?
     
  8. SirBigO

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    bumpin for crits.

    ( i know the I is to wide for the S but any other toughts, builded critisism would be appreciated!

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    Meph, liking what your doing all tough i personaly don't digg any of your H's and might have gone to far with the Drips on the second flic;) peace.
     
  9. RES4

    RES4 Elite Member

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    beef over. black wins

    sirbigo- i dont like it, neither of the letters are really distinguishable. the s would make a good j tho
     
  10. <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>

    <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]> Senior Member

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  11. DAXR

    DAXR New Member

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    Piece i drew up, AVIAT
     

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  12. memphisbleak2133

    memphisbleak2133 Senior Member

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    people start shit with me.and i do post shit too,not mutch
     
  13. otter

    otter Senior Member

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    damn smokers,fucking good
     
  14. <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>

    <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]> Senior Member

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    Thanks otter can you find anything I might be able to fix or better for my next projects?
     
  15. flask1995

    flask1995 Senior Member

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    it's all good but In my point of view I don't think really you should improve on, If you think just wait for more crits but crits from me, I think you should just get off toy blackbook's and go to the other blackbook thread. nice work, I will start studying these pieces :p
     
  16. <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>

    <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]> Senior Member

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    Thanks and I went to both the reg and the intermediate ones and they told me to come down here :/
     
  17. Zookyook

    Zookyook Elite Member

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    meka pretty dope... still gotta keep workin at that structure... but ur gettin better fo sho! the top character has great shading with the colors...

    smokers those are all pretty crazy, the smurfette one or w/e is the best if u ask me


    for everyone telling u guys to get outta this thread cuz ur not toys though, come on now lol ur both toys! intermediate yes but big boy not quite yet, at least in my opinion, i mean that in the nicest way hah

    and for etch...
    afarm4.static.flickr.com_3077_4564463280_c18cab3d80_o.png

    if the vanishing point is basically where ur finger is then the right bar of the A should have some 3d coming off of the left side... if u look at the 3d on the very bottom of that bar theres a few differences in direction... and the inside of the B where the 3d is should match up with the angle of that bar, its just at too extreme of an angle..... basically every line should go to the same spot, and urs is just a bit sloppy, i made the pic just to show where ur lines are going
    but basically u should make a vanishing point and use a ruler if u have to until u can just KNOW where the 3d should go exactly... hope i helped
     
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  18. pleasedontstayr

    pleasedontstayr Senior Member

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    Only thing i dont like is the middle of the M, it seems a bit too small, but i have a feeling if you made it bigger it would fuck it up. M's are bitches to play around with. Also to the right side of the M the 3D is way shorter than the rest. Overall sick sketch though.
     
  19. <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>

    <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]> Senior Member

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    Thanks man, and ya I honestly don't care where I'm at anymore kuz last time I went to the reg bb thread saw couple people who didn't belong there either but they didn't take down their stuff so I'd rather stay down here if they're going to allow that..and you guys are pretty chill so ill just sit back and relax:cool:
     
  20. bzerkyetii

    bzerkyetii Member

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    new to the game
    my first throw with this name
    crits would be nice
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