Man, quit posting the same 30-second simples over and over and demanding crits without even giving crits first.
Not feelin it Cane. Bar widths are wack and just the style of the piece is lame. No offense. Simps/rollers maybe and a new throw idea. Crits. Edit: Ignore that bottom tag. Did it at like 4 in the morning lol.
i was too lazy to try and fit in a "Z" lol colours pop more in real life tho... shittay camera ftw Jok(z)? by JokzOner, on Flickr
cool letters bro, only the o seems a bit bad... and about the colors, download photoshop and edit them there
just some shity random words View attachment 610485 i chose these at random i dont write any of these
jokz- sick, i dig that style, O is a little weak tho. and the arrows coming off the 3D is unnecessary. jiska- no beef, but thats pre wack. if youre not gonna do keyboard letters at least simple it up and drop the extensions. but i do like the S on the last one
yo last one on the bottom is pretty good. The one above it could use some fixing of the proportions like the right leg of R is super thick compared to the thickness of all the other letters. Your extensions also make it so your letters arent defined, except for most of the very bottom one
thks for the crits, this was just a testing of the markers, can you give me any crits on the lion i posted here? it´s a project for the room of my young brother. and thks to rib for the crits 2
Yo Jokz thats pretty cool but i think you should work on the k, it kinda looks like a R nah! - keep writing straight letters until u get the letter structure down solid and then you'll develop style naturally MN Nice - i like that throw up, pretty clean...keep drawing any crits for me?? not really feeling what i did with the Y and the A. Btw, this is like my 5th straight letter
I don't know how bad the y and a is, but the fact your A is so far from the R really makes it look bad. try mirroring the top of your E with the bottom a little. looks dumb flat at the bottom like that. The R is was top heavy and the bottom leg looks a bit stumpy. Practice straight letters like the are on your key board. notice an R leg doesn't have to come from the corner of the top and horizontal and back bar. Keep working. Jiska your characters are always boss, I like your style but work on them letters. I don't feel how squished the bottom of those S's are. Jok, your k looks like an R other than that the shits sick to me.
heres a crit work on ur tags they are totally POO and for ur simple... the R isnt to bad it needs a bit of work on the top left area and the bottom right leg also the E is way to small compared to your RVN 3d is pretty much good and make ur lines straight not all jagged as hell ur R especially!
since theres nothing but shit on this page, ill actually post something aight kids this is what simple pieces look like when time is taken so Rev Noner this is what to look forward to. for a hell nice chick, took about 4 hours straight for the record, done with fineliners
yall need to get off revn's case. it's his choice whether he wants to progress or not. no one's concern If he doesn't want to evolve his style. Lotta bombers out there doing chrome simps like these back to back all day, and they get more ups than any of us here. so as far as I'm concerned, my crits are the following: wear your lines cleaner, adjust those bar alignments on your R, get everything nice and smooth, make a proper shadow instead of the 3D/shadow mutant, and you're golden. go destroy your city with that shit.