when sombody asks for crits that usaully means you give them crits instead of being an ass hole becuase he just started and hes looking for some useful advice to help him improve... you douche...
Row: the ROW will look better pretty much 100% of the time. Start there. I'll have something that might help in a bit. anyone new in here that's posting scribbley looking shit. Stop, it's not working and you will never be able to force it to work. You normal hand writting works better even if it's shit. Go get a typeography book, scour the web, look at any good writers handies... (you'll never see some scribbley/wobbly/shaky shit)
1. you suck even harder, fag 2. come at me, pip squeak LOL 3. i don't have anything against toys that are just getting their foot in the game.. but its the attitude and lack of knowledge that gets me. educate yourself or sit back and observe before you open your mouth.
any crits..tried to keep it simple [Broken External Image]:http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/2440/img0065cc.jpg
hick... that bottom one has the most potential in my eyes. try it with the e the same size as the an.