nice man, but the 1st flick you might wnana fix that curve on that E, it's not lookg really good. otherwisei ts pretty good. nce job.
Kew: You're adding curves and extensions in the wrong places. You're adding unnecessary extensions that don't compliment the letters at all. You also need to learn about flow. Your bar width is off. that second flick is an undecipherable mess. There are your crits. Now either listen, and get better, or keep posting the weak stuff you've been posting.
kew-make all the 3D go in the same direction cuz having every word goin in a different direction doesnt make any sense
That was the first thing I noticed. As well, that K..? Not feeling it. Amongst the other things that were listed.
nicole- i dont like the kicker on the bottom right of the N or the kicker off the top right of the O but other then that its clean. roes- i like the lil throw above ur handy stick with that throw up style. woner- not really feelin the silver kinda makes the rest of the piece look like garbage and i dont mean that in a disrespectfull way the structure is bangin. kew- whats the second one say? and the canvas is tihgt but u shoulda made ur highlights the same color in all the words
yeo you guys are posting and not criting others stop that shit hpir nice bars but keep working on it and plz tell me you dont write that and roes your shit is kinda wired work on it and keep trying look agin right under me fucking crit others if you want some crits
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ahhaah, Fix your E btw, the curved part is making itself look ugly. btw please check otu the sticker's and look at my block buster sticker :3
ahhaah, Fix your E btw, the curved part is making itself look ugly. btw please check otu the sticker's and look at my block buster sticker :3
woner can u post some white/black outlines? just straight up no color lol i cant really crit unless i can only see the letter strutture
WOW for me thats special. how did that come to you? did it just randomly come to you or does it come deeply from your imagination?
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