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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. kew1

    kew1 Senior Member

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  2. flask1995

    flask1995 Senior Member

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    nice man, but the 1st flick you might wnana fix that curve on that E, it's not lookg really good.

    otherwisei ts pretty good. nce job.
     
  3. CrustOner

    CrustOner Elite Member

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    Kew:

    You're adding curves and extensions in the wrong places. You're adding unnecessary extensions that don't compliment the letters at all. You also need to learn about flow.
    Your bar width is off.

    that second flick is an undecipherable mess.

    There are your crits. Now either listen, and get better, or keep posting the weak stuff you've been posting.
     
  4. LIZARD

    LIZARD Senior Member

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    kew-make all the 3D go in the same direction cuz having every word goin in a different direction doesnt make any sense
     
  5. Inlyn08

    Inlyn08 Senior Member

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    That was the first thing I noticed. As well, that K..? Not feeling it.
    Amongst the other things that were listed.
     
  6. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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    kew work on the 3d

    haven't really drew enything juss some shit from class
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  7. suparjafar

    suparjafar Senior Member

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    bump
    kew dude you need to go way simpler
     
  8. hpir

    hpir Senior Member

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  9. Sesh-it-up

    Sesh-it-up Guest

    nicole- i dont like the kicker on the bottom right of the N or the kicker off the top right of the O but other then that its clean.
    roes- i like the lil throw above ur handy stick with that throw up style.
    woner- not really feelin the silver kinda makes the rest of the piece look like garbage and i dont mean that in a disrespectfull way the structure is bangin.
    kew- whats the second one say? and the canvas is tihgt but u shoulda made ur highlights the same color in all the words
     
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  10. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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    yeo you guys are posting and not criting others
    stop that shit

    hpir nice bars but keep working on it and plz tell me you dont write that

    and roes your shit is kinda wired work on it and keep trying

    look agin right under me

    fucking crit others if you want some crits
     
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  11. Sesh-it-up

    Sesh-it-up Guest

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  12. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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    put a drop shadow on it
    nice bars keep it up
     
  13. Sesh-it-up

    Sesh-it-up Guest

    what side? and thanks im tryin to go back to the basics lol
     
  14. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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    i would say go to the left it will be smoother

    i would like some crits on my ishhhhh
     
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  15. hpir

    hpir Senior Member

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    nah man just some girls name
     
  16. flask1995

    flask1995 Senior Member

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    ahhaah, Fix your E btw, the curved part is making itself look ugly.

    btw please check otu the sticker's and look at my block buster sticker :3
     
  17. flask1995

    flask1995 Senior Member

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    ahhaah, Fix your E btw, the curved part is making itself look ugly.

    btw please check otu the sticker's and look at my block buster sticker :3
     
  18. Sesh-it-up

    Sesh-it-up Guest

    woner can u post some white/black outlines? just straight up no color lol i cant really crit unless i can only see the letter strutture
     
  19. flask1995

    flask1995 Senior Member

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    WOW :eek::eek:
    for me thats special. how did that come to you? did it just randomly come to you or does it come deeply from your imagination?
     
  20. BIGel

    BIGel Elite Member

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