moganone- i only like the letters of the last one...u need to work on ur colors i think.

stussy- i like the style i think it would look crazy with some bright colors n a outline

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..crits

 

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an e I sketched up while I was at my bros house

 

^^grow up

 

lol? its the toy thread man. chill out. and how bout actually givin me a crit so that i can get better

 

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i dont really like this but...

 

Stussy- I like it, i would make the letters solid and get rid of the arrows on the R

 

says the guy with the gap letter and giant arrows. haha
work on simples thepekins.

 

crits please?

 

stussy- next time make sure the hookups are evened out, but dont take them out fully

 

all i have to say dude is bars u lack seriously in that department

 

waze man ur doing the same exact shit i use to do u r gettin ahead of urself bad my dude it took me awhile to realize it to but ur not gonna get any better till u realize that. work on simples. no extensions no add ons no chips no arrows none of that stuff just pure letters then once u start to see some flow and bars in ur shit then start doing more complex shit

 

bottom page bump

 

waze start over simple

amero i only see a M and E. throw away everything youve dont and start fresh and simple

fukew the E and W are ugly and it looks like your trying hard

 

fukew make the main bar in each letter go in the same direction to make it flow better. the letters arent bad on there own you just need to make them look good with eachother

 

Yeah thats what Ive been doing lately but Im having I guess what you'd call writers block right now, all this stuff Ive posted is from a couple months ago.

here's a simpler sketch, the characs awful

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that wat i mean dude keep doing that. lose the arrow on the w though dont add anything to ur letters and make the middle bar on the w,a,z,and e al the same width and ur good man

 

and make your letters closer

 

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just sketched this up. real real blazed not sure if its any good

 

replace the X in the A with a triangle and remove the block on top of the Z