thanks for the props everyone,i definitely appreciate it i know this isnt a blackbook piece but i didnt know where else to post it haha got high and drew on girls
Quit trying to add style and work on your structure. The best letter you got there is your J and its still lacking. Keep your bars even Pover
Dempo- Nothing's a waste of time... graffiti's one big learning experience. You have a lot of extensions on the bottom that don't really help the piece, and the one on the top right of the V is the same deal. Keep working on those letters to build structure, and then try adding extensions that compliment the style and flow of the piece. Pover- Keep your bar widths even, or at least fairly even. Although there are times and places where varying the bar width works, you're not quite there yet. Also, your 3D needs some serious help. What happened in the gap towards the bottom of the P? And at the top of the P you made a drop shadow instead... Check out the good threads on this site to get an idea of how 3D should work.
No, thats much better. Just drop some of the stupid stuff like the horizontal bar at the bottom of the V, and some of the cuts(or all). Its not that bad
lookin way better Dempo, although i would drop the horizontal bar on the v as mentioned but also on the 2nd A. i understand you probly put them there to look symmetrical which os good, cuz your paying attention to balance and shit, but they dont fit. and the first A looks funny, woulda made it same as the second. over all its jery clean and R has potential.
alright yall, this is probobly the most challenging thing in my spare time at the moment so if I happen to get frustrated dont take it personal. thanks for keeping me in check.
no problem dude. My nightly peice a crap. i understand the 3d is off it was just freehand, crits. mess around colab!! i was outshined...
Much better temp. Neer you gotta step off naked's coattail and work on your own thing. Its all good to take notes and get ideas from each other but that last page looks like it came straight outta his blackbook. New sketch
i dont understand why everybody thinks im "on his coattails". that pissed me off. ive been doing my N's along with everything else before i ever heard of naked. i have been writing writing twice as long as him, i know it doesnt show but i have. he's been posting here longer so suddenly everyone thinks he inspired me to start writing or something. its a generic ass style, and neither of ours of began to delvelop yet. naked does not own diamond tipped bars, or the letter N. your S and 4 are off.