Nah!: you can even just bomb that "m" all over the place instead of putting in a throw use it as your throw. its quick, easy, and recognizable. Rezume: looks good man, i like the second character the best. Dankbudz: i like the style, i gotta say im more a fan of the diablo than the Pablo. Heres a new elephant character lol MF JOKZ by JokzOner, on Flickr
I tried painting myself. turned out looking like a retarded latino thug [Broken External Image]:https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.ne...71850969_202093693143954_1039474_297389_n.jpg
the mask needs more dimension like the shirt. but the arms look very good. good attention to detail and structure
the whole head and the bandana was below average, I'm not the least satisfied with them, the right arm also... only parts I'm ok with are the left arm and the body. by the time I got to the head it was starting to get dark and I couldn't reach the head (the furthest my hand reached was the eye level of the character, and I had to stand on a barrel to reach that!!!) so the head was all done with a "whatever... I just wanna get it over with and leave" attitude if you know what i mean, I have a fierce urge to go back and go over the head again with a proper one :/
^^^ can't see it brilliantly due to the texture and colour of the background but i likes what i can make out phat....give yourself a little more credit buddy!...i'd never think to do a self portrait ok some recent doodles nowt exciting [Broken External Image]:http://img37.picoodle.com/i57p/potts/16fp_35d_u905z.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img37.picoodle.com/i57p/potts/16fp_8d5_u905z.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img37.picoodle.com/i57p/potts/16fp_15a_u905z.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img37.picoodle.com/i57p/potts/16fp_314_u905z.jpg
^^love the last one but a lil bit more face like structure instead of a potato shape would make it look better put this lil guy in black book only thing i liked about a piece sketch i did, ended up liking thinking i might tweek it a lil bit here n there and make it my own personal character, kinda like joks has with elephants
@Phat2 ok, if it would be done properly it would look good. You have to fix the hands, rag and the head. Left arm is a bit out of proportions. The shoulder circle should be a bit bigger than biceps. cant see the elbow, maybe its cuz of the wall. And if you look at the palm of right hand its so big it can cover the whole face, its also bigger than the one on the left hand. So you have to make it smaller or make the head bigger. Straighten the neck a bit, looks like he is leaning forward with his head. Use the same technique on the rag as you used on shirt, it will look much more real. And the eyes should be smaller if you look at the nose. If you had some reference it would be great help. And i think that it wasen't finished when u took a pic of it. I hope my crit is usefull for you. I saw some of you letter peices, and they are good, and i think you can make that karak much better.
cheers Mc Satan yeah i like the idea of it too think i might try it again from a different angle to make the actual head look a little more 3d...should be fun think your little teddy there needs some evil eyes coming out of that helmet rather than buttons
oh yeah sneez, definitely. I agree with all you said. the reason why the face and the rag are bad is because I couldnt reach that high, I had to stand on a small barrel to be able to reach his eye level, so I wasn't able to work with the head properly at allllllllll unfortunately, this is a photo of the final product. I really want to go back again with a ladder and fix the face. this thing is about 2.5 meters high.
^^^ again you really don't give yourself enough credit phat.....you spray yourself and i'm quite impressed and then i find out its like 2.5 meters tall ...WHAaaaat!!! lol
thanks arsebandit. you can see why I wasn't able to reach the face and work properly with it then hehe but yeah, you can tell its scale judging by the cans in the photo
weeeeeeelll i posted this in the blackbook section but i figure this thread hasn't been getting much action so..... trying to progress my style some more trying to improve these in particular, crits?
Think you need to do some more like the last one rather than the first too...they look flat her looks a little more 3d and man thats one hell of a chin!! [Broken External Image]:http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/3914/1005634x.jpg