awh the swirls aren't working eh.

 

@thepekins sorry man but im gettin a lil sick off all your damn bragging i wanted crits but now your bragging very ignorantly
@mippi i like how its simple but it needs some work in my opinion the n's look a lil funky and your r is a tad bit to small
@fuckthefame i like the top one

 

new throwie shitty handie and character

 

shitty throwie too... only good letter is the n and only if it was standalone

 

throw some structured funk on that
bombs are basically circles ENKM
or at least for the style your attempting i think thats a good assumption

 

havent sketched in a minute, heres a quick one...crits would be appreciated

 

looks great in general, except the middle part of the W

 

yeah I've been tryin' to figure some shit out, but I've had writers block for a minute

 

@fuckthefame so i should basically just make it flow better and all? like do have like a reference pic for throwies? that would be help like i dont see many throwies
@phat2 any tips for the other letters?

anyone have any tip on the character?

 

sorry mom. Didnt mean to make you angry. Ill just go to my room now

 

Zewl that is teh dopenesss

 

overall i think thats the best i have seen from you yet.
just an opinion but i would drop the diagonal bar lower on the z so it mirrored the L a bit more and the w is weak but i know how much of a pain in the ass they can be.

 

not when u think of them as just simply an upside down M hehe

ENKM, go to the main forum and then into the throws/bombs thread and check out some photos there, draw some inspiration from dem big heads, see how they operate their machinery etc... for a starting point, I'd say just spend a good couple hours checking ot flicks, nothing more. find what you like and start practicing on a similar style.
but in general, I'd say u need to structure your letters better, and give them better flow if u know what I mean, you probably have the idea in mind, but you need the practice

 

@Phat2 will do man ill be back when i think ive figured out sumthin good x) but thanks

 

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Looking for some serious crits on this. no bullshit

 

either shorten the left bar on the w or make the right bar taller. on the bottom of your w on the right those weird curves don't really make sense...make them sharper..work on that e...lines are kinda shaky...and the bottom leg of the e should be goin more out instead of up, maybe connect that bar on the R to the bar on the E or something like that. idk whats up with that thing on your R..you know what im talkin about. and the kicking leg should be more even instead of skinny to big. i feel like i can see you drew a line across the top to make it proportionate....yet you went right above it with the r and the tip of the m....the 3d is on point except the W has a little bit more than the rest...your M looks fine to me just try and make the M and W match. I like the little background hatchpattern thing. keep it up bro

 

2 peices i came up with last night, crits please

 

Don't do those shines ever again bro...

 

finally had time to draw this weekend, think i might of posted 1 of these before it was finished...idk if there a thread for abstract so its goin here, shit might turn out after i put the shines on, got no white tho




@zewl aint really diggin the way u did your Z, the way you made the bars connecting unsmoothly so many times(if that makes sense) i think the top part is fine but the bottom half makes it look weird and then the way it overlaps the e makes it so u cant really see its an e. and u threw in a couple weird extensions like at the top left bar of the W...just my 2 cents