bump!!

haggard ass flows always look nice when the person can toss down there ish wit style!!! 5*

 

Well if you dont consider it a piece, and its not a throw, what is it?

 

Lol? i like the enthusiasm on this website yes ive been to the graff creator but i can guarantee that i sat there for half an hour using bars i have no need to bite

A Thriece?

 

A simple....?

 

So it would still belong in the Bombs/ Pieces thread

 

Anything you paint on a wall belongs in bombs/ pieces thread.

Throwies drawn beling in throwies

anything else drawn belongs in blackbooks thread.

 

Evolve- work on throwing some style into it. and keep spacing even. Fill in the gap between the 'L' and 'V' Looks like you've put a whole lot of time into your tags. Work on throwies now.
Mr. Yarbles- That's fuckin fresh...
Bored- That doesn't look like a throwie....

For some reason it looked better when I first drew it
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If your gonna do an exclamation, dont turn it all off to the side at the end

 

Make your V's and E's the same

 

What?

 

Evolve. Your V and your L look the same dude. Keep working on your simple shit before you try to throw style in there. Keep working on the kind of stuff you did in the blue. And make that flow. THEN throw style in there.

 

Make your E's uniform to each other and make your v's uniform to each other

 

This is all pencill.... don't have money for paint markers to sketch with... sorry if its not dark enough... please tell me what im supposed to improve on.... its supposed to be curved...
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Make your letters the same size and use bars.

 

if thats supposed to be a throw then dont use bars. if its not then toy bb thread

 

Its supposed to be a throwie.... what are bars though? sorry im toy.... tryn to get up..

 

new to graff thread. i cant really explain it. but it does look like a simp/piece. round it out a bit, unless you like square throws. study some throws a little to get a good idea on what to work on. a good place to look is in the picture gallery in throws/bombs.