As promised. A few flicks from my BlackBook. Crits welcome.

Cheers

 

critz on this anyone, painted this twice and been buffed and one just a outline i gotta still get a flick of since my coucil hate me and buff me within 1-2 days

 

Pitlord- your first two are lacking great letters. however the second to last one is dope. also that last pencil one is absolutely fucking sick even though i have no idea what it s
Toopski- dont do the swirl things in the S

 

iser- dont do the swirls they look kinda dumb, and that R is really hurting mang. fix it, and you'll be set. post flicks when you paint a new one

 

BLOCK

SIR

i would appreciate crits

 

Crits please only been in graff for a week. So i need lots of crits haha

 

did this during class, pretty fucked, but crit if you gottem

 

Your S and E are a lil big.

 

first S from you that I like dank, congratulations man, youve come a long way. Start expirementing with more complex shit

 

you know, i actually really like it man, good shit, showing alot of improvment. nice clean flow

 

so dope man.

i also like your characters alot. real clean.

personally i think the "fuck bitches and hoes" is kinda corny. if you were going for humor then its pretty funny, but i think it sorta detracts from the piece... other than that, i like the nice simp style along with the little lines outlining it.

 

^^ dope shit man

quick lil sumthin, i know the 3d is messed in a couple spots but w/e


i threw the grey in for rib ;P

 

Bump to top for crits.... I know it sucks but the only way I see myself getting better is with help from other graff artists and this is the place...

 

ay your 3d is fucked as well as some of your bars and your R. lose those quote things. this isnt very intermediate...

 

for my homie jerm
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Acro - use bars and do keyboard letters

 

Thanks Zeta.


The left one is supposed to be my tag from bottom up in shape of a woman Ignore the Gorilla.


Work in Progress

 

Toop, the swirls add something that no one else does in this thread, thats why people are not liking it, and to be honest, the only lad who can rock a decent simple on this thread is dank, so the rest of you can eat a dick and learn what you're preaching before you preach it.. Honestly, its just toys giving other toys advice.

 

Agree. Would be more helpful if some more experienced writers from the intermediate thread or above would come visit "us"