i'd say make all the other letters flow with the Z. they're all hurting except that one. got bars where they don't belong. don't double up bars in the middle of B's and R's. they combine in the middle to form one.
This would make a sick ass slap.. you should try to make some slaps like that cause I definatly would wat some of those.
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tasty - shit'd be crazy on a wall wgone - your on to something i know u guys r gonna hate the spade. but crits anyways?
looks mad fresh, the letters are in check, the color scheme is on point, i like the whole ice cream/ candy vibe you got going, too.
b squared - dooooope char like they said throw that on some slaps or it would make a fresh wheatpaste tasty - /jizzinpants love that steeze you got it on lock
Tasty- those are both hella clean. I like the drips on the bottom, it'd be sick to see those painted Trestoner- There's just to much going on in that for me. It looks like all the structure is good though Wgone- that's ill. Im diggin' the middle and the last one. keep it up Coen- if the bottom of the last three letters are flat, maybe make the bottom of the C flat too? or make the bottoms on the last three letters not flat? just keep working it. The throw is nice, work the handie Bezr-Your Z is smaller than the rest of your letters. Try making all your letters like your Z and bring the leg of the R up Murphy- the crink in his tail is the only thing I dont like, the rest of it is legit, I'd like to see stuff you do on a canvas no joke. Shell- I'm not sure what that is soo um maybe make it look like letters?
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