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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    oh yeah no doubt, the piece is visually pleasing the way the colors make it jump off the page. No doubt a ton of skill was used to make it that way. once his letters come togethor he'll be turnin heads.

    @jiska you should really start thickening up your outline. make the lines a little bolder and the outline will look really crisp. As for the letters, their on the right track, but have a kind of weird look to them because of the extensions and weird bar widths.

    Starting with the S, that extension that comes out from underneath the middle bar that connects to E is weird, and the letters would look better without it. The E is extremely top heavy. The R's left most bar gets really skinny at the bottom and kind of throws off that letter. If you would have made it the same width at the bottom, but made the shape the same just a little more squared off it would make the R more solid. The I is hidden, and the crossing bar of the A is a little too small imo. The L would look fine without the connection to A. Id say do without all those arrows too, cause most are coming out of nowhere...

    I really say put the emphasis on making your outlines boulder though, cause it would really accentuate your style. that moon character is dope btw
     
  2. .Cuore

    .Cuore Senior Member

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    agreed about the S-->E extention, but the illustration on the characters is quality man I dig it.
     
  3. Jiska Matos

    Jiska Matos Senior Member

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    thks guys...i see my chars r more advanced then my letters :p
     
  4. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    word your characters are sic and your lines are super clean def alot of potential there
     
  5. Mori

    Mori Senior Member

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    Id like to see what you can make if you really stick to some simple bars. I feel like you could really get down if you eliminate some lesser m aspects of your pieces
     
  6. snal

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    nedovur6ena_skica_by_veko032-d4di5e4.jpg critic is needed and accepted :)
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  7. Jiska Matos

    Jiska Matos Senior Member

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    just something i did at work today
     
  8. giml75

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  10. DRZ

    DRZ Member

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    wanted crit before outline. for my homie PLAYG DA PREDATOR. hopefully on next mixtape cover.
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  11. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Take another try on the Y and G. Less kinks in the bars.
     
  12. DRZ

    DRZ Member

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    damn, i thought i got loose on that part too. haha. my favorite part is the bar shootin under the A and L. when i drew that i was like oooh shit.
     
  13. DRZ

    DRZ Member

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    i actually have a home boy who writes PESK that burns your style man. not tryna hate tho..
     
  14. FactsSAG

    FactsSAG Member

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    wow.. some of this stuff is alright.. but on other ones.. theyre toy af'!!
     
  15. DRZ

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  17. snal

    snal Member

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    from today,im not having the money right now for markers and shit,i prefer giving them for paint!The charecter is a 10 min fuck
     
  18. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    i like the character, IMA STEAL IT

    O no, thotz is back. New account, but same shitty style
     
  19. snal

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  20. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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