oh yeah no doubt, the piece is visually pleasing the way the colors make it jump off the page. No doubt a ton of skill was used to make it that way. once his letters come togethor he'll be turnin heads. @jiska you should really start thickening up your outline. make the lines a little bolder and the outline will look really crisp. As for the letters, their on the right track, but have a kind of weird look to them because of the extensions and weird bar widths. Starting with the S, that extension that comes out from underneath the middle bar that connects to E is weird, and the letters would look better without it. The E is extremely top heavy. The R's left most bar gets really skinny at the bottom and kind of throws off that letter. If you would have made it the same width at the bottom, but made the shape the same just a little more squared off it would make the R more solid. The I is hidden, and the crossing bar of the A is a little too small imo. The L would look fine without the connection to A. Id say do without all those arrows too, cause most are coming out of nowhere... I really say put the emphasis on making your outlines boulder though, cause it would really accentuate your style. that moon character is dope btw
Id like to see what you can make if you really stick to some simple bars. I feel like you could really get down if you eliminate some lesser m aspects of your pieces
damn, i thought i got loose on that part too. haha. my favorite part is the bar shootin under the A and L. when i drew that i was like oooh shit.
from today,im not having the money right now for markers and shit,i prefer giving them for paint!The charecter is a 10 min fuck