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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. eFx!82

    eFx!82 New Member

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    022912172605.jpg just starting out
     
  2. Coleo

    Coleo Elite Member

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    What the hell does that even say?
     
  3. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Your sig. Really? ^ C'mon man.
     
  4. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

    MASTAH_RIBCAGE Moderator

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  5. PREA672

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    Lol I think its upside down?
     
  6. Coleo

    Coleo Elite Member

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  7. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    eFx - try going a lot simpler, just do keyboard letters for now

    did this today in class crits please
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  8. dankbudz

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    try and not make the 3d so long, looks good though. A should be standing straight.

    lookin for crits on the SELDOM..
     

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  9. DEMPO

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    wide awake here bro. looking good, seder what size book u got there.
     
  10. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    8.5 by 10 i think... idfk
     
  11. SHEARZ.

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    Liking the Ninga Turtle one or whatever, but your bottom one with red outline, hating. Purely because this font is of the internet, which you have copied.. If you say it not, I got proof dude ;) But yeah liking the turtle character.
     
  12. Willis1989

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    Zombies - Really like the characters and the fill
    Sez - I like the E but I think the whole piece would look nicer without the spikes at the top
    Decay - 3d is nice, I wouldve kept the A more straight

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  13. AstoK

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    WeAreZombies- your stuff looks like its all from graffiti creator
    Dank- im glad that you are still doing simples, you have the nicest simple in the toy forum, i would love to see what you could do if you tried a semi-wildstyleish piece, because you clearly have your letter structure down
    skewr- you also have a decent simple style, i like what you do with the colours, and the overall shape of your pieces make them look like you know a bit about your graff.
    spex- learn how to hold a pen and go simpler.

    pic for talking
    sketch for a mate
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  14. Shit Outta Luck

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    Your N is off ^ and the W is a bit to small. The leg of the R is a little too imo. It's clean as hell though
     
  15. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    thats looking fresh, nice style, digging that tag too.
    only thing id say is it could do without the keyhole on the N, which could let you beef up that middle bar. and beefin up that W up wouldn't hurt too.

    don't really like how this N or W turned out, but can't say i tried too hard.
     

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  16. SynOne

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    Dank on W's I would make the middle bars ever extend past the outer main bars it seems to always make it look goofy. I like that E though.

    Crits appreciated.

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  17. SkateJunt

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  18. TastyMcNasty

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  19. dankbudz

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    tasty thhats lookin dope, although i think thats a bit too many bars on the bottom of the left leg of the A. maybe pull it in farther and kick that bar more under the D without the lil extra one.
    i think your shit will look tough once you start bringing it in tighter. oh and that E is looking a bit big.
     

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  20. TastyMcNasty

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    thanks dank, it;s only a rough sketch, so i'll fix that on the finished piece.