Mone those are looking tight, but i think you could make the M a lot better GErb- dumb that top on down
never said his weren't "fine", just could be better. and yea, what i posted wasn't an attempt at anything great...
actually, i dont think i do... I like those m's, and you were extremely vague on why/how the m's could be better
The three basic styles I've been screwing with. The first one was a letter style that came after I just let my hand naturally draw the letters, but I still managed to get stuck on the A. Had a few ideas for the A, but they came after I took the picture. Crits?
ok... I am horrible at throws... I've only tried a couple of times. I kinda like the direction of this one. I'm counting on some of you guys that are good with them to crit this shit. Hipe, reach, naked, brains, venom, youth, there are a few more of you but cant think of at the moment, but I'm lookin' at you kids. edit... I know the lines are rough etc... it was more to get the idea on paper and see how it works. I'm looking more for letter form and how I might improve flow, shape, etc.
Maybe just try pointing off the bottom hook of your A, a bit. And your last N is a bit fucked up, id shit the little feather tip in the middle of it to the beginning left side, make it somewhat resemble your other N.