hoping to go out soon, crits are def appreciated on this. I'm trying to avoid adding negative space between the E and X

also, I know it gradually gets bigger, don't know why it happened but im usually more consistent than that.

rip it apart

 

My attempt at a throwie (NORD) (I know it's whack as fuck)

I'm having real trouble coming up with one for my name, some of the letters seem tricky next to each other no matter what I do. Thankfully I think I'm having a little more luck with my handstyle.






If anyone wanted to sketch something up quickly so I could look at the flow of the letters etc (Read: NOT bite) I'd appreciate that.

 

Think about throws when you can write a proper simp

 

I'm not sure what you mean, sorry.

 

working with both can help out with each other.

 

throwies really arnt my thing, any of them worth pursuing??:

 

i go by AFTR
the cap on the beige was supper shitty and was not working at all should have changed it but oh well
my first throwie
any thoughts critiques?

 

IMG_0185 by centrysams, on Flickr


humor by centrysams, on Flickr


humor toss by centrysams, on Flickr

 

Next time you do a throwie or anything with two colors in general, use two colors that are complementary or opposing. Or at least not next to each other on the color wheel. Because you used beige and yellow, and they kinda blend, making it hard to see what you wrote. From one toy to another.

 

yeah i didn't think of that when i grabbed those colors will do next time... any crits on letters or too hard to see?

 

id say stick the basics right now magoo, your letters look fucked up, i wasnt too sure what is said till i read your text. also stop dragging your piece to the right, it just distorts the letters further.
Szar, id say the same to you, basics man, you need to get to know your letters a bit better, play it up.

and humour holding it down thats wsup

 

thanks bro . dont paint much . tryin to get out more

 

no, none of them are worth pursuing. start over

that looks like SHIT. do these toys not practice on paper first or what?

 

bump for crits please

 

the P and E could be more distinct and the X, which looks like a K right now, should be symmetrical to itself so have a line come in from the left side of it too.

 

why bother giving crits to these toys, they must have a somewhat decent throwie before i bother giving crits.

 

my advice for everyone having difficulties with toss would be to just do 2 letters until u are confident with it
if u cant rock 2 . u deff cant rock 4 or 5 letters

 

havent posted here in a bit, what you guys think?