the style is good but calm down on all the highlights especially on the 2nd pic it takes away from the letters
the d you used on the last page looked nothing like an o. use it. and what youre doing with your throws right now is stupid. youre squeezing the letters too much and, with the sketchy highlights youre using, its all getting difficult to read. also, the leg of your r, the way it curls out at both ends, just doesnt look good.
you seem to really like the way your r looks, so i guess i wont restate what ive already said about it. try making the nose (middle bump) of the e larger. if you want, play around with different tops for your letters (curves, squares, everything in between). the ridges you have right now dont look so bad on the d, but it looks odd on the r. oh, and mark the holes in your letters. dots/lines, ya dig?
I feel ya , I'd already finished that one before i saw your comment. I always get blinded and want to make the ridges or bumps consistent rather than aesthetic. I'll keep workin with it. Thanks again.
[Broken External Image]:http://i1269.photobucket.com/albums/jj598/kehm2/18.png Need to fix the E, majorly.
if i were you, i would exaggerate the bump on the side of your s. like so [Broken External Image]:http://suxorz.com/i5/sadfsafsdf.jpg fresh! it would also be worth trying to do something clever with your o. lots of face potential there.
KehmONE - the left side of your g could stand to kick out more, i think. add a little flavor to go with the lip you have going. it also a bit smaller than the rest of the letters, which never really looks good for the first letter. - the a looks boring. switch it up a bit? - see about removing the negative space between the bottom of the s and the a. - your e isnt as bad as you had it out to be. granted, it does looks like it has a stupid grin on its face. - it looks like all of your letters are wider up top than they are down bottom. if thats something youre doing intentionally and you like it, go for it. if not, i suggest fixing it.
I see what you mean about the G, it's actually the same size but it's a webcam picture so the perspective is slightly off from the way I was holding it. I liked my 'a' I thought it was simple, but fit the style of the rest of the throw. Not sure what I would do about the negative space. They're intentionally wider at the top yeah.
if they are intentionally wider at the top, try to make each of your letters the same width at the top and the same width at the bottom. This gives your letters some uniformity. About your E, try to make it more rounded on the bottom lip, that might help it a bit. And like chad was saying, your A doesnt really fit the style with the rest of your letters, its TOO simple.
I agree about the face on the O, but gotta say the S you made me looks fucking bad... Atleast IMO, thanks for the advice though !
I like that A honestly. The E has a boat load of face potential... make that bitch spitting shit! I like the throw. It'll have some serious funk with a bit more work.
@H1P digging that concept, try the drop shadow on the other side maybe? Trying different stuff to make it look better