quick sketch piece says bend2

 

oooo well usually saying your "cooked" means you just smoked oxi... maybe its just where im from...

 

big ben's is orgasmic, what are you doing in the toy sectionn?

 

did this a few weeks back for my friend in collage haha

 

@urb thankx bro just trying new shit!

 

BUMP looks tight! love the style

 

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alright work on ur letters they are all crooked and mad shaky, and dont put ur tags inside the letters it just doesnt work

 

Hoen, work on your bar widths and keep your lines straight. And what the fuck is up with the inside of the O?

 

Pointman- that fresh, im diggin that train. try working on perspectives though, the verticle lines on the windows should follow those of the bus.

 

@pointman that train is sick but like dankbudz said work on perspective more, cause right now the side of of the train looks wierd, you have to make the side get smaller as it gets further away

 

hey dank was that picture tooken a little bit on an angle or straight on?

 

a bit of an angle, didnt want my shadow over the picture.

 

"Tooken" haha
@Seder, Not too bad. The angle throws off the letter widths a little bit; the S looks rather wide there. And the R isn't that smooth but it's pretty solid overall.

 

^^
i loled at that too

and thanks bra, the S and R were the weaker letters. i didnt even fully sketch the R out, got too lazy. Imma post some of these completed next week once i get markers again.

 

stupid fuckin s i dont know why i did it.crits pleazzzzze

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Go more simple. Does it say EOS? Your extensions are bad and so is the arrow placement. If the small extension towards the bottom right side of the E has 3D, then shouldn't the entire bottom of the letter have it too? Also the 3D on the middle bar should end somewhere. Make sure the length of the 3D is consistent too. The top of the S is lower than the other letters, and the bottom is higher. Try to keep them all the same height for now. But yeah, go simpler until you have more letter structure.

 

SED, Your letter structure is pretty good but I think if you're gonna write with an R you should work on it a bit, you often make them a bit top heavy. I don't think the tops are too big, I think the bottom is too small but your stuff is clean man.
Sir.To.You, your style is pretty original, but work on your letters and consistency like RASM said. I can't read whatever the fuck it is you wrote.

 

sir- i think the bit on the top hole on the s really doesn't help along with the little arrow out the bottom of it, i do like the letters themselves though i just think those bits and the other extensions are kinda more of a distraction than a positive on it, however the light red 3d looks quite tight good choice of colour with the black outline