Bring hell upon me with crits. haha

 

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so does it look anymore like an n? or still an h?

 

It looks like an N. Have you tried doing the C with the top part over hanging rather than it being the way it was.

 

the lines in the N are too close to each other, space them out.

 

con why do you point the top of your C? just make that round like everything else.

 

hey do me a favor
go to a sex shop buy to two biggest dildos u can find
go home stick one up your ass then the other on down your throat
SO U WILL SHUT THE FUCK UP !

 

lets all remember this is the TOY thread where TOYS bring theyre crappy TOY throws to get crits to get BETTER.

 

Clops Aka Colz Just try and do this or better yet do your throwie IN between lines or on lined paper.

 

Looking at the picture I noticed I need to bring the right side of the top of my n down.. It looks massive when it goes into the d so high. Anyone else got crits? Please.. Tear me apart.. Please? haha

 

and-the name idk, yr a is basic good start yr n is prety fuckd dont make the d go so far into it, make all yr letters basicly the same size
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crits?

 

Kem lovin that shit PM me I wanna paint monday

 

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there's a line in the o on the top..just ignore it. it's from the other side of the page

kem: love it
and: yea, bring down the n. and what's with the bulge. i'm guessing that's the end of the n? i would say don't put that there.

 

Con - The right bar in the N isn't the same as the others.
Hpir - Not digging the M.
and - Change the d a little.

 

hpir-i like the k,you need to work on the e make that shit flow a lil,just try a different m.
con-not feeling it,the c looks mad shaky and the n doesn't go,keep working on it try other styles and shit

first try at a one liner

 

Doesnt look like a oneliner at all I see two spots where it stops and starts again.

 

KEM - nice and clean
CON - round up your C and make your O more...idk...fun?
MERC- your C is iffy, take out the two bottow extensions

heres mine, completely redesigned
crits plz
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^^Looks good but to me the e is kinda to spaced out for that style. diggin the R and h

 

Better?
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Dont know why you tilted the "I" like that like its almost laying it down. It covers the "R" to much.