@Soap make that O the same size as the rest of the letters, that's very simple for a throwie so don't worry about that. @saltire i know how you feel, as for the sketch make sure your letters would stand alone. Last one of today. the E looks funky to me but i didn't want to make shit worse by trying to tweak it.
I think i just didn't grasp what real structure was or how to use bars correctly to create it before, and i just simplified that wacky complex sketch i posted a few days ago and tried correcting everything until eventually it turned into something worth looking at haha. TL : DR My dealer got G-13 and i'm feeling fuckin' creative.
@Cred: your shit just keeps looking fresher every time man. Really diggin' that flared shadowed you got going. @Seem: lose the arrows, keep bar sizes consistent. Honestly play with basics first before you just throw arrows and shit everywhere. Fucking spent forever on this bullshit trying to get proportions right. Still feel like something is off about it. Didn't feel like wasting time on a fill for a shit piece but I've been trying to work on lettering. Crits? (Upon further inspection my K and E connection are a little wonky....)
^^^ thats it . u got it . that piece is pretty solid just fix the top of the r were it rounds of to the c . the same thing with the d . rounds of behind the e . other than that . its nice one on the very top of page is dope 2 . but 3d is off in the middle there
damn Cred in just a few weeks you've got some serious shit going. I'm proud of you. You make me wanna get focused like that. I just gotta find time between 60-70hr work weeks and sleep. Awwww. Naps is in love.
If cred has a baby with Flo from Progressive. They would spawn the most focused baby on the planet. cred is my hero
diddlin twats would be a sick band name. and thanks yall, wouldnt be anywhere near where im at if it wasnt for good crits and advice. @Peter i'm proud of you too son.
not just good advice and crits, but the willingness to explore those ideas with determination. Work on painting that blue joint.