I recently started, but I'm working on it. Let me know what you think.

[Broken External Image]:http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/6222/belr.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/4856/flero.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/1076/img3287xbo.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/4079/img3292a.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/1265/rfc.th.jpg

Edit: I'm using Sharpies right now, cause they seem to do alright, and they're cheap. But if anyone has suggestions for something that'd work better, I'm definitely open to hearing them.

 

use bars cause that shit is god awful. start simple. take out all the arrows and dont put you letters together yet. also take out all the colors and extensions. go to the new to graf thread. but ya space out ya letters, take out the colors, take out the extensions, take out the arrows and use bars. just draw keyboard letters

 

mase go simpler
it looks good tho

critz???????[Broken External Image]:http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo03/e7/55/e233cf7a8a2a.jpg

 

^^ only thing i can say is proportions like im sure you meant to have some parts bigger i do the same thing but i dunno try and make it flow better if your going to do that

 

I was loving this page.... until Jonni Trikk posted. hahaha ah well. Like Neg said, use bars.

 

@sin - i like your top right sketch.
shoulda inked that one.

 

I posted a similar one about a week ago. Trying to fix it a little. The bottom should be darker, I know. And I'll probably eventually throw some 3-d on it. But tell me what you think.
[Broken External Image]:http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/piece001.jpg

 

i'd make the bottom of the 'A' even, then make the bottom of the 'E' slope \.
but that just me.
still sick though!

 

[Broken External Image]:http://i355.photobucket.com/albums/r455/jesus_wuz_here/P1020100.jpg

CRITS?? anyone?
Jaep-make the bottom E bigger and the line that crosses through the J make that even
grime- looks nice but somethings off about the G idk why lol

 

bump

 

crits.....

 

@neaz - i like that, real nice
@sin - yea, that's looking alot better
@cyto - so ill
[Broken External Image]:http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/WebCam_20090510_2011.jpg

 

cyto- the E overlaps the L to much
also the C and A i think
sin- yep thats the way...
ask- i would take off the extension or whatever through the s and k

 

[Broken External Image]:http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs44/f/2009/130/3/1/Money_Folder_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

 

ask just do simples for while because that isnt gunna go anywhere for ya

 

Yeah, Ask, it would look better simple.

 

its dope but I got a Q, why are the always random bars hidden behind your letters?

 

[Broken External Image]:http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/4646/p5103230.jpg
MEA
i couldn't get the A to look right and 3-d is off also a new E im tryin look good or any crits?

eskimo- looks pretty good if i was you i would get your green fill to be even too many high and low spots
ask- seems like you have the art part of it down so if i was you i would do simpler letters with black and white fill tell you get em lookin good
cyto- nice to see you tryin some new shit i dont really like it it looks to sloppy but keep tryin at it and watch proportions
sin- that might look good if the N was same size but as it is i dont like it
neaz- i like the nea but the z looks all skittywompus try and make the connecting diagnal bar thing straight its plain but it will look better