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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. AlecR2K

    AlecR2K Senior Member

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    ai48.tinypic.com_2ewdycz.gif

    late night sketch, first time trying something like this.
    rip it apart

    ps all the lines inside the letters are from messing around trying to shape them better.
     
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  2. flask1995

    flask1995 Senior Member

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    pretty sick man, I'd stay its all good but on the K the bottom left the Leg should be removed, and IMO the K is bent alittle bit too much. although i'm diggin' the S alot man. it looks messed but you wanna make the S alittle bit more straight.
     
  3. AlecR2K

    AlecR2K Senior Member

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    ya like i said, its a first attempt. tons of work to do
     
  4. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    Bear - NO

    alec - thats pretty decent. id just say find a way to make the right leg of the k go down instead of an angle.
     
  5. gumOnShoe

    gumOnShoe Elite Member

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  6. RemoZ

    RemoZ Senior Member

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    Gum- The I is pretty wack all around the other letters look good, would look nicer with a shadow.

    Bear-Sketch for a long time.

    Likely going to piece this the weekend after next(I'll be in Florida this weekend)

    I plan to do a Dark brown to light brown fade from the bottom to top with maybe around 4 different shades, Black outline, Kinda light blue double outline.

    I know the E needs some work and my shadow game is whack. But I really like the WOR

    any crits?

    [Broken External Image]:http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/9677/photo38pl.jpg
     
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  7. Patchy

    Patchy Senior Member

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  8. RemoZ

    RemoZ Senior Member

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    Learn Structure, you really need to bite the key board for awhile. It'll help alot man
     
  9. dave the pirate

    dave the pirate Senior Member

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  10. -Empty-Can-

    -Empty-Can- Elite Member

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    S is garbage. Crit it though. Still working on this. The right leg of the R is kinda bothering me too.

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    SLM- simples
     
  11. RedEyes

    RedEyes Elite Member

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    Stot-were's the style comen from? make the T's identical and make a straight leg on the R.
     
  12. -Empty-Can-

    -Empty-Can- Elite Member

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    Was that meant in a good or bad way lol? I used to always make my T's identical and I'm trying to differ them a bit now. It looks too odd when they're the same.
     
  13. Flawless Victory

    Flawless Victory Elite Member

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    I'm also interested to know why there is a sudden change in this sir's style.
     
  14. -Empty-Can-

    -Empty-Can- Elite Member

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    Practice, Inspiration, progression. I dunno.
     
  15. RedEyes

    RedEyes Elite Member

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    Inspiration maybe, direct bitting the TO yes. if you need inspiration dont just bite it study the style and how it flows then free hand your own.
     
  16. -Empty-Can-

    -Empty-Can- Elite Member

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    I didn't bite anybody. I don't know how you think I did.
     
  17. Flawless Victory

    Flawless Victory Elite Member

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    Look at that O, then look at your S, man.
    you don't think that one is suspiciously nicer looking than the other one?
     
  18. -Empty-Can-

    -Empty-Can- Elite Member

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    It is. I put a new S in too. I don't see how that proves I'm biting. I'll post the finished sketch in a little.

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  19. AlecR2K

    AlecR2K Senior Member

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    ai44.tinypic.com_15hzn6s.jpg

    i might be getting the hang of it. still working out the flaws in my K structure, the S is doing alright IMO but still need a lot of practice.
     
  20. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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    yeah those are so generic common used letters..then you have to say that all the stuff in here is bitten cus i swear ive seen em all somewhere..thats simply how most of us start off, it always looks quite the same...stupid, call the bite bring the proof and still its nonsense
    classic example is right above me

    sk, actually i favor the k over the s, loose those little cracks and top bar a lil shorter, do your s bars thinner n try to make it fit the more stiff bars of k or shape the k the style of your s plus i wouldnt use sec outline color for background n blocks but whatever..you get it..oh and i hate that name, a gay crew in and around my area write sk n they suck n cross like crazy..but thats just me

    nothing, you did bite nothing,did you even read the post properly??..thats exactly what im talkin about but fuck it..
     
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