I feel you before, but I didn't like the P cuz I made it to thin. The connection under the A shouldn't a been there, but eh. I liked the C. It twas fun.
And anyways Naked on the right one the bar for the Q is a bit to low, you shoulda raised it or turned it more outward. It blends with the D. Otherwise it's pretty fresh, except maybe the a in Naked, seems cramped ya dig?

Also, Cred, that does look cool but it doesn't work as well as it could. Keep progressing and experimenting every once in a while!

 

Ya i messed up the A and was like shit...well its too late and just went on coloring happily. haha thanks man

 

Finished this one up I guess haha. Feel free to crit.

 

Fuck. I'll rotate it later on photobucket.

 

Ow my neck. Watch ya bar widths mues, the right bar of your M, right side of U, bottom right of E and S. But I like the M and U, not the E though, it leans to much and throws off the other letters. Funny character though, and if it's any consolation nice hand. Better then mine anyway.

 

CCS Sticker! haha
basically what sol said, watch your bar widths and youd be good

 

what do you guys think of this? ive been messin with things and i kinda like this with the S taking more of a Z shape..

 

I knew id fuck it up.
Skiz not bad but that K is awkward

 

yeah i knew someone was gonna say that. lol. u think it would look better if i made it like this kinda with the bottom leg more squared... and maybe even the top one with it

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A canvas I just recently did. Gimme the loot (feedback).

 

I like your rocking chair.
Nah skiz keep it the same, just make the 2 slanted bars meet at the same point, ya feel me?
and make the bottom slanted bar of the k straight

 

Skiz it's the top right bar of the K that makes it awkward. Mostly. And Naked I don't understand your thought process...why's the Q so small...and cramped!

 

ooo i gotchu.. thanks dudes

 

What's wrong with my thought process? Haha and because I did it in marker and I knew it was too late to fix it... Well that's why its cramped. Its small because lately I am in the habit of doing every other letter smal... Idk its a phase lol

 

haha a phase. Quick flick for talk. I coulda colored it all and added shadow or something to get rid of space and make it look pretty but it doesn't matter.

 

Is that the first page of your blackbook or something?

 

isn't it the 11th?

 

Oh...fuck. Oh well. And uhhh I just got my actual book back. I just wanna remember where I actually started. I like to keep time and shit, it motivates me.
Here Naked, I fucked up the D...and K...and everything.

 

It's the 12th here in the UK.