Feeling it, I wouldn't make the bottom of the E so long, though.

 

nice bek!

give me some crits people

 

here are a few from a while back:




crits yo

 

I like the 1st, 2nd, and last one. idk about the pink fuzz behind the second one though.

 

fresh material:
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work on the second speak

 

pencilpusha tags bek...and lets just say hes about as fuckin ill as you can get

 

Zane the first one looks good i jus give the a lil more form there seems to b a bit of dead space around it

Bek - good ashit bro



critz?
i kno the colors r dark i used sharpies wen i shoulda used my otr .840 's

 

some simps

sike- simpler bro-sef

 

SIMPLE STEEEEZE!!!!!!

 

Who gives a fuck? RhodeIsland guy, that 'bek' is sick.

 

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tiger- work on the h bud an itll b a nice throwie
rersperation - id fix the p and r i think you should put an opening in the letters

i went as simple as you can get
critz?
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your s looks like a throwie s. dont do that

 

word the h is weak.
ill work on it and get back at ya.

 

hey brand new to this ,heres sum of my stuff crits please..

srry 4 the bad quality pics =[

 

hey go post in the exchange thread cuz i go sum ideas for u. i actually was messin around with that name awhil;e bck but i was gonna be size up i got sum pen ones tht r decent

 

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crits?