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What y'all think? I fucked up the I in the second one because I was gonna do 3D and then I forgot because I'm a motherfucking space cadet.

 

Uhhh, I think you need to learn how to attach an image...

 

meh


shit hips thats badass....

 

bumping for more crits

 

our M and U are pretty close... i can dig it mues... maybe instead of that sad face part of the S cutting into the E u could make it kick up into the S... hard to explain hah sort of like "n/" curved on the left and kicking up on the right like that

 

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A little shaky cuz I havent had my weed today, you get the idea though. The Js arent on point right now

mues I like it, I'd work on the es a bit. Nice U.

 

IMG_0222 by centrysams, on Flickr

 

that Gowj is a clean throw.

 

Thanks man, my U was influenced from Humor up there so he should probably get more props. Good shit guys.

And I'd say go with that bigger O instead of the one with the bar on the bottom. Keep it clean and mean, na'mean?

Edit: and if you were to start your G on top of the loop and go to the left then you could flow into the O real quick and it'll be better when you keep your hand motion going. Know what I'm trying to say?

 

Crits on this one?
resQ

 

Don't do them on the bottom of the paper ^

 

tryin somethin new

 

Why cant i make a naked throw thats good?

 

u can . bro .

 

can i get some crits on da last picture

 

i would say dont make big bubbles on bottom an then small tops .
when i am tryin somthin new i just do two letters. if u cant drop 2 letters solid u cant do 4 u no . try doin two letters until u find a style u like. then add the next to fit the style .

other than that all i can tell u is dont do just one . fill many pages . with a bunch of tosses.
pick the best an fill another page .

 

ive been doin em all day that was the cleanest one that i like the most but ill work on it

 

working on the A and the F this is what i got crits... i really like the A but iffy on the F

 

lower case?