lose all those random spikes yo

 

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Really simple i know, Crits?

 

more crappy throws with a deformed ape head thing..

 

u need to work on shadow, u should think of it this way, make pretend the letters are real and there sitting directly in front of a wall about idk maybe a foot from it and decide where the sun is, now picture the shadow hitting the wall, if u can picture that in your head then you can see where the shadows should be.

And remember that ur shadow lines should match your letter, straight where your letter is straight and curved where your letter is curved

 

shitty fill crits plz

 

3D and i think u should do away with the dots

 

the bottom of your R looks like a ballsack and the dots in your e r and p look like nipples. hahahahaha

 

i hate both of these but fuck it. was trying a cap e on the top one obviously(sorry bout the sideways im to lazy to retake the pic)

 

The caps E is way better but still think the dots gotta go

 

im not sure what to put can seem to get anything that i like (dot wise)

 

try-lines,stars,swirls,letters,peace signs,anything really.i dont honestly think its the dot aspect,its making that dot a circle instead of a dot.

 

sorry about this im super bord and will try some new things n upload them in a bit

 

keep that s and e you have and get to work tweaking your other letters,right meow!

 

Exactly, S and E stay the other letters go, and the X's deff look better than the dots, your on the right track

 

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Seriously though i want advice on this

 

taro its lookin solid

 

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There u go Slerp, it kinda sucks but idk

 

idk what your other one is
but the 1 you posted doesnt really have much flavor in my oppinion

 

on the top one ignore my shadowin the secound 1 im really not feelin my r