dude you have to crit other peoples work before they are going to crit yours. core: tweak the r and the e
core - the C is too big, tweak the R PegCity- I'm also interested in seeing how you tweaked it XD [Broken External Image]:http://i390.photobucket.com/albums/oo348/Numaga/downsized_0725001954.jpg crits? S got cut off :/ I know the top of the U isn't very good
CuCCui get the fuck out of here emo anyways heres a sketch i did about a week ago. please post crits on what you think [Broken External Image]:http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/7269/throwuphavoc.jpg
havoc I see where you are going ,but you seem to lose focus in your exicution...dont put a big circle above your "I" it makes it look girlie...for the throw use a "crack fill" for the shadow,make your letters uniform in size and wieght and for christ's sake put some individual style into it...if you dont want me to cuss and stuff respect me with the same courtesy... NUMAGA,that's a good start,but watch the edges try and make them crisp and clean,also watch you fill coloring experiment with "crack fills" the help prolong the life of your markers..search the tutorial thread I posted a tute on coloring back in the day when I was MUSASHI its basic but will help with your presentations.
any tips on making an individual style? every time I've tried it looks like garbage. I'm not asking for you to do it for me I just want some tips
[Broken External Image]:http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8882/picture24fp.jpg I had to high light with a Sharpie so i couldn't make good clean lines.. My black prisma color is dried out so i gotta rack some more prismas soon! Please crit on the style not the fact that some of the lines are bumpy.
View attachment 577160 View attachment 577161 umos- take out the penis in the middle of your m and make your u smaller as well as the little mountain on your s.
So wait... you say my shit is terrible but i don't see you saying how i should fix it! this forum sucks i hate feeling like im not meeting standards of other ppl! i like it! so im sticking with it! ill get better gradually over time, it takes practice.. so im not getting on anymore.. Ill buy from bombing science but i'm not posting my art just to hear.. "that shit looks terrible".. Fuck that! For me art is independent, If you like the art that you do then it's fine..
...heres what you do,take your drawings throw them out the window and replace them with a car,consider what you want to do with that car,consider why you even need a car,upon consideration you may find a bicycle will suffice your needs,for what you do you might need a truck,a motorcycle,or even just a cool pair of sneakers...you have to consider this as well.how much time are you willing to commit to its application,how many colors you want to use....the main thing to consider in "DEVELOPING STYLE" is this function dictates form...Look at race cars for example,they all have to abide by a predetermined set of rules,how they interpret these rules can be shown in aesthetics,performance,and ultimately success or failure... ill do one for you,your word my style I'll post it up in a second.
I did this on notebook paper so you have an idea of its size...took ten minutes to develope about 30 seconds to draw the final image you see.the vowels overlap the consonants as they are without extensions.two colors...what a throw is is a piece thrown up real quickly,mostly used for bombing and its utility...how to develope style...the best advice is enter as many battles as you can manage the time for...your work will crown itself in time...look in the old battle threads,my old shit is MUSASHI.I only won one battle out of all the ones I entered but I didnt let that discourage me I was on fire in my mind...and alot of people liked my stuff but there were alot of writers that could burn me upside and down the other...did I care no!!!! I did what I did and I'm glad I did cuz I was getting up... [IMG=http://a.imageshack.us/img340/8849/havokxcuccui.jpg][/IMG] Uploaded with ImageShack.us
Thatguy- I'm kinda likin those. Good simple style. The E and N need a little work. Numaga- GO SIMPLER. Work on clean lines and form before trying to get crazy. Take it slow. Ashis- same advice Havoc- Clean it up. It has potential. My funk.