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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. Vagrant

    Vagrant Elite Member

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    ai223.photobucket.com_albums_dd274_vagrantone0_2010Throw.jpg

    constructive crits only.
    i don't care if you don't like it. it's what i do.
    these are approx 8 inch long stickers.
    the letters will get less shaky the more i make
     
    Last edited: Mar 3, 2010
  2. .nolove.

    .nolove. Senior Member

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    looks like you were attempting to bite someone elses style.just sayin.i just have that feeling like you looked at someone elses shit and took that shit.i might be wrong tho.idk.





    either way im watchin you boyyyy....
     
  3. massacreman

    massacreman Elite Member

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    vagrant looks good, work on your n and t
    like: make the n capital and dont round the lower part of the t
     
  4. markingz.

    markingz. Banned

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    hey vagr, dat pen too thick for me id look better thinner
     
  5. TheToy

    TheToy Elite Member

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    Looking for crits on the overlap of the bottom of the 'W' by the 'T'.

    I shouldn't bulge so far over to the left. That I noticed.
     
  6. Flawless Victory

    Flawless Victory Elite Member

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    I think you should pull some Pie1 shit and make an interpretation of the sq root symbol.
    afarm1.static.flickr.com_41_73977014_9a391ad46f_b.jpg
     
  7. TheToy

    TheToy Elite Member

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    Word. I been thinkin' the exact same thing.

    Been tryna' sketch up a wild throw that forms a square root symbol but it's haggard.

    Good crit. Much appreciated.
     
  8. RES4

    RES4 Elite Member

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    vagrant - didnt like the g at the start but now i really like it

    rewt - if you could do something with the sqaure root sign it would be sweet but i dont really like the t overlapping that way.

    ai46.tinypic.com_2hz03fm.jpg
     
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  9. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    Toy - I really don't like the R and the E man. The overlaps alright, but I feel the T's getting to be too big on the bottom
     
  10. -Empty-Can-

    -Empty-Can- Elite Member

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    rewt- too many tumors on your letters
     
  11. zaco

    zaco Senior Member

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    res thats clean. nice one!
     
  12. Vagrant

    Vagrant Elite Member

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    res, the e s and i are tight. try not to get that negative space by the dot in the i
    the other two letters are eh
     
  13. TheToy

    TheToy Elite Member

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    Unless you're a physician, the tumors will remain.
     
  14. AlecR2K

    AlecR2K Senior Member

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    too many tumors i agree
     
  15. Xfish

    Xfish Senior Member

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  16. MoistGarbageCan

    MoistGarbageCan Senior Member

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    make the E bubbly dude. just try and make letters chunky. not fat. but chunky.
     
  17. SHER_WON_WTS

    SHER_WON_WTS Senior Member

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    not much of a throw. to many small sharp corners and alot of space in the letters. a good throw eliminates the space between letters making it easier to fill. all that space in the E the K and the S has to be filled.
     
  18. MoistGarbageCan

    MoistGarbageCan Senior Member

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  19. Xfish

    Xfish Senior Member

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    ok ill work on it thanks
     
  20. smoggy_mcfly

    smoggy_mcfly Senior Member

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    xfish try to keep it simple but not too simple
    bubble style is something you could work with
    try to create each letter apart then add them together
    make the letters also overlap a little.