That's a pretty nice looking r jiska but the random placed scraps in the negative space look bad

 

i tried going simpler and this happened

 

^ This.

 

I think you have a good idea, but it'll need a lot more work. Especially your i, try not to place it right under your t or else it'll look likemamscrewed up j.

 

stein lose all those connection and just focus on simple letters..remember less is more
had some free time today and did these
i dont like the N in this one needs work
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@Sed what kind of markers do you use that's dope.
@Dane try the first one without pointing your bars and the bottom of that A looks iffy.

got new markers but they bleed a bit.

 

Hick94 I see what you mean. What you said actually helped a tone it just clicked in my head that's a lot.

im sorry if i get annoying with all the crap im posting and if i am just tell me ill lay low but is this one still too complicated

 

damn i hate my markers too so much... They blew me up. The colors don't fit with the paper. It sux. I'll show u later how it is

 

cred- sharpie for that. i use sharpie, bics, n whenever i cop some prismas i use them

 

Yeah I got prismas but they bleed a bit on my blackbook's paper. Maybe i just need to step my game up hah.

The D was messed up on this a bit

 

You shouldnt even color anything. just do sketches, all you r doing is wasting your materials.

but no one ever listens to that so ill tell you this, your coloring is blotchy as fuck. you need to color like you would do a fill in. Start at the top, and go side to side to the bottom.

 

I color because i like seeing my work with colors, materials can be replaced. And yea i was way too stoned to do a proper fill on that one haha.

 

is this at all worth continuing for the round robin tourney, or should i just sketch something simpler?

tape battle in the proccess by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

 

if you want to lose.

 

ight thanks i wasnt sure if it looked good or not, just screwing around

 

i dunno man, just do what you think. but you just went the super toy route on that one, lol
just remember structure and flow are your 2 best friends, not connections and extensions and arrows and symbols

 

yeah i have some better ideas in mind, thanks for the advice though

 

Not so sure how i feel about this one, lines came out a little wonky