not done yet. definitely a rough draft. [Broken External Image]:http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/142/002fyv.jpg
@reboot - you're missing 3-d on the "R" and it's not consistent thickness, but it looks ill! @crust - i agree with the other guy, flip your "T" @umer - i like the "UM" of the top and "ER" on the bottom haha
Rest Revolt: what was said above and the letter spacing needs to be better the o looks like a D. just try to get an overall style for you letters Reboot?: don't like the r but the character is sick [Broken External Image]:http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/8391/dscf3333p.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/2479/dscf3335k.jpg
Emediation: I love the S, K, and the shadow but the A needs work and it looks weird overlapped. GoGetSome: You have some good ideas, but your letters are really sloppy. Clean 'em up a bit and make the lines straighter and it'll look good. CrustOner: I love the U and the T, but the rest seems pretty out of flow with the whole thing. What markers did you use for that, btw? CaughtSlippin: It seems obvious that you're new to graffiti, but read up on some styles first, I can't really crit this. I'm not sure about this being a throw, but usually throws have curved lines, not super sharp points on the corners of letters. Also, the arrow is weird. The letters don't really look fat, there isn't an overall flow to it either. Keep working at it, but I bet there's like ten writers named Revolt, so try coming up with a more original name, maybe with less letters since you're a beginner. KRE1: I like everything except the R and the B, your character is awesome, though. TJK: The one on the left I'll refer to as 1, the one on the top right is 2, and the one on the bottom right is 3. This is how I see it. ES from 1, R and T from 2. Three is the worst there, and the shadow is weird. I really like the T from 2.
yeah i was going for a goofy ass look cuz i was going for a stoned kind of theme but yeah i think it would look waay nicer if it all flowed tha same size
pretty much done with it... dont know if i like it or not [Broken External Image]:http://img27.imageshack.us/gal.php?g=003hvv.jpg
did this today in math... still trying to stay simple..... what ya think.CRITSS needed i know the N is a little weird
ey breh i like your tag looks pretty clean tha quick throwie tho iono youre right tha N is pretty goofy id maybe try to tighten tha whole thing up a bit ya know ? btw feel free to crit tha shit outta my stuff
lol yeah thanks man. after i got done with the N i was just like....wtf is that. but your shit is kinda sick man. i love how people incorporate characters with there throwies
reboot-its got flava but the structure is all wacky, fix it up sin- like said by others loose the dingleberry here is my ish from the weekend(not all of it but what I felt like showing) View attachment 476483 ^^older style throw View attachment 476484 ^^new style throw pulled off horribly View attachment 476485 ^^new throw pulled off good View attachment 476486 ^^random day hollow in the west end of town