RIP swer he will be remembered

 

wow roes you've improved alot.
when are your going to paint that new throw?

 

I have to get upper case E's down, I write RYPE. I'll work on it.

 

Dude, Rype, your letter height has to be three times your line width, if not a little bit higher, for capital E's to work...

Seriously, write it like Rype, but have the r the capital r the same size as the other letters. It's a shit ton easier. Save the all caps one liners for another day when you can put them to better use.

 

ROES: Looks like ROPE in one of them. Rotate the E to the left to match the rest of your letters. Your shit overlapping on the left bottom side of the S over the e looks bad.

 

Pedo battle

 

You honestly think that looks like a bubble D man?

 

Im not used to writing d's its for a battle
Show me your D

 

He needs to rotate that shit 180 degrees, so the tips at the top and looks lowercase to match other letters.

 

I'd make it have a top to match the base is all, don't get your panties in a bunch learn to crit you work yourself so you can tell whats up with some things.. other than that capitalize the e.

 

His E looks fine bro, you love some capital e's huh?

and when you crit yourself your ego often makes your opinion bias. He want's other peoples opinions if he's posting on here, nobody asked you to crit him. When people give you crits you're supposed to listen to them, which obviously you don't since your last like five tag posts have looked identical, just saying, no beef though.

For future reference, when you crit, you tell them what to fix about their letters. Not ask a rhetorical question first just to be a dick.

 

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finaly made a little progress on my throw
crits anyone?

 

lololol every letter was caps except the e, I'm not your bro.

 

My "panties" were not in a bunch i was trying to see your opinion on how to do a D. I cant do D's but now i know. Thank you.

Xfish- errrr.. I dont know how much progress you've made man it still looks extremely wack too me. Just start it over

 

trust me its better than before
it really really sucked

 

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For the lulz, what I do it for.

 

P's and O's look the same lowercase or uppercase. The only letter that was definitely uppercase was the D...

since the e was lowercase I figured that was what he was going for...

UEKS- Your e and u are curvy, and your k and s are sharp. Pick one or the other haha. The line in the middle of the u needs to come down further, S and E need a little bit of work on the letter structure. Start with keyboard block letters, forreal, then tweak them and make sure your letter width, and letter style stay the same. Obviously your practicing, it'll get better.

 

thanks man and i guess i should also make the u look like a v cus thats what its supposed to be haha ill work on it.