SLEK-work on maken ur letters straight first then incorporate the bends later. View attachment 521124
Crits please... This is the newest piece. [Broken External Image]:http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/5721/dsc04873l.jpg
looks like you tried too hard...lots of random stuff, k, the way its leg bends into itself ,the arrows and so on...all that forcing your piece to look symetrically , does not work out. your e is a mess, cant breath in there, give it some space. id just reconsider the spacing, flow , size, ...try to work on that
snaw i think that S could be closer with the rest of the letters and put that W on a diet imo. the lines look shaky too but i like the simp style. arite a little something i was working on last nite. [Broken External Image]:http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/5003/004qat.jpg
Nice kaleef. Keep working with that. Satra, that character is meh. Fix his eyes, and it looks like he's chewing bubblegum. I wouldn't do that with the S in the throw either.
yo rinse that shit clean i would change the n cus it looks like an H crits on this? i changed my name... once more. to Reatd ( ree.ated)
Rines-work on maken all ur bars straight, like with the E i suggest drawing it out with the over lap n then erase. Coca-im digging everything but the D and if ur ganna do a spade on the T make it a whole spade.