hahahaa, buddy

 

SLEK-work on maken ur letters straight first then incorporate the bends later.

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For Kies (uk)







one of my new piece's...

 

Crits please... This is the newest piece.

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Anyone gonna crit mine ?

 

looks like you tried too hard...lots of random stuff, k,
the way its leg bends into itself ,the arrows and so on...all that forcing your piece to look symetrically ,
does not work out.
your e is a mess, cant breath in there, give it some space.
id just reconsider the spacing, flow , size, ...try to work on that

 

You talking about Keso's piece or my Kies piece ?

 

no. give crits to get them.

 

You traced those.

 

jmann youre gay

sico looks dope, pumpkins a little big

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snaw i think that S could be closer with the rest of the letters and put that W on a diet imo. the lines look shaky too but i like the simp style.

arite a little something i was working on last nite.

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cool shit you got goin there

 

Nice kaleef. Keep working with that. Satra, that character is meh. Fix his eyes, and it looks like he's chewing bubblegum. I wouldn't do that with the S in the throw either.

 

add some 3D to that KF, I reckon the stars dont belong tho

 

solid rinse

 

yo rinse that shit clean i would change the n cus it looks like an H
crits on this?
i changed my name... once more. to Reatd ( ree.ated)

 

Rines-work on maken all ur bars straight, like with the E i suggest drawing it out with the over lap n then erase.
Coca-im digging everything but the D and if ur ganna do a spade on the T make it a whole spade.