alright so i'm sure that u some of u guys think that i'm trying to do graffiti without understanding it. and well, i do agree with u...So, i'm gonna start all over, and start with regular letters, and learn as i progress. and yes i did sketch them with pencil first, the camera didn't pick up the lines so i retraced them in marker. (some of the pencil line were too skinny for the marker, so some of the lines are messed up like the holes for the b) [Broken External Image]:http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0554.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0555.jpg
StayHye: i'm guessing it says delap right? well anyways, i really like the red one, i would probably also like the green one if the e's didn't have big "noses"...nice faces haha
Yall *****s all need to chill out, because you all need some fucking work. Cybe- dude, that shit is all out of whack. I don't even know how to help you along. bleek- your shit needs work. the shading on the inside of the letters is whack, and the tounge is madddd played out. your B is goofy looking, and all your letters are stuffed as far back as they can into the letter behind it. Check yourself before you act like a dick. Delay- your shit really isn't BAD bad, but it could use some work. Try to move your letters close together, and don't go so crazy with the shadows. The first one is best IMO, and those E faces are pretty whack. Redone for stuss because I fucked up the last one. Still looks like shit, though
bigblue thx for tha crits i dont act like a dick until someone makes a smartass comment at me. bigblue im not liking that handy at all
[Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0619091051.jpg Working on a 2 letter, crits? Bleek- Make your L and K less hidden Delae- I like the second one most, but yeah get rid of the faces
Delae- Yeah the first would be good if you moved the A in closer to the L and just did dots where the faces where Stussy-The rihno throw you did on the other page was fucking tight! Zarb, I Dont like it personally. The top part of the E is ugly. and the top left arm of the K needs to be smaller. Sorry if i sound mean, I just havent been feeling your shit lately. BigBlue- I like the repition at the bottom of the throw. but the second last letter, I think its a Z. To me its a little to covered by the I at the bottom. KRE1- GET OFF YOU FUCKING HIGH HORSE! We all need to work on our shit but get off your ego trip! I can see two horrible characters on it and why the fuck are you adding letter shading on a throw with a shadow already on it? and by the way your shadow is "not on point". Its totally off on the drips. IT.NEEDS.WORK! Cybe-Your actully going in such random fucking directions, Just sit down and look at what others are doing. I think right now you need to bite some letters, and i know other members will disagree but personally I think after you have some letters to work off youll develope a style completly diffrent from them. Crit as usual...
Watup guys haven't wrote in like forever but im gonna be back!Also getting a car in a few weeks 1st throwie in ahwile and it was on a desk while taking a regent lol.Crits?? StayHyE-I like you style but its sloppy fix it up a little not so much negative space BigBlueViolence-Looks good maybe try to make you letters straighter,seems like there going to the right Zarb-Def need try a different E or soemthing and fix the K up a little maybe make it a little wider
A moderator can delete this post if he/she wants but... Kre1 just shut the fuck up, where all here to help eachother develop our throws, You just like starting shit. If you dident spend your whole day posting in the toy throwies thread like 5 times a day maybe you would have some time to spend to clean up your own shit. If you two wanna beef keep it to the PM's so the rest of us have to see it! flick for talking