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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. One Evil

    One Evil Elite Member

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    nah no background.. just filled it all in for the 3d hah... ya the letters are pretty much mangled .. tryin to clean it more but word.....

    what about the throw up.. dece throw or should i keep givin it some more. hah
     
  2. Inlyn08

    Inlyn08 Senior Member

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    Something I did on my break at work, not really too sure how I feel about it. Trying a new name from what I normally run with.
    I know for sure I hate that R..
    Crit it up. Need some feedback.
     
  3. GASM!

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    Thinking about painting this (or something similar - sort of like my last post) sometime this weekend. I got in some Ironlak and I'm dying to use it.

    I know this is just all shades with a pencil, but I have a decent amount of colors to work with which I think will look good with it in the end.

    I did take someone's advice (don't remember who) and changed the M around.

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    Any crits appreciated.
     
  4. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    I'm going to do what all you guys need to do: GIVE CRITS.

    Gasm - I don't like your fill, and your force field/splash is too thick. Also, the top of your S is too big and it's really hard to tell that's an A. The G looks pretty bad too. And the M's alright I guess.

    Ares - I like your character, it reminds me of Twisted Metal for some reason haha. Your A and R are on point, but that E is ugly, and your S could use some work.
     
  5. shem

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    far from done..
     
  6. CrustOner

    CrustOner Elite Member

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    Bring the EM closer to the SH
     
  7. W_G_O_N_E

    W_G_O_N_E Elite Member

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    seems like the s is kinda small and compacted to me shem, but like the style furshur
     
  8. Mr yarbles

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  9. shem

    shem Senior Member

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    agreed. lost all ability to scale shit...


    bc i got high.
     
  10. CrustOner

    CrustOner Elite Member

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  11. Inlyn08

    Inlyn08 Senior Member

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    When I saw this, it made me hit the books.
    Sadly, when I went to color I realized I had shit for markers. Less then what I thought, that is. So, at any rate.. not happy about the colors and I know it sure needs some tweaking.
    Crits, suggestions, advice.
    Thanks!
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    The clown.. LOL
    EDIT: OH SHIT LOL.. I forgot to color in the gums....
     
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  12. Inlyn08

    Inlyn08 Senior Member

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    ^ Describes what I just did....
     
  13. Zookyook

    Zookyook Elite Member

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    this is dead on... like i said maybe intertwine them bitches...

    and gasm fury pretty much said it all... that outline is too much and distracting, and if u wanna do a bubble fill like that get some markers or somethin cuz it doesnt look right being the same color as the outline, go simpler thats all

    ares the first char and letters were way better...
     
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  14. smokeitup

    smokeitup Elite Member

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  15. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    Yeah.
     
  16. DirtyDozen520

    DirtyDozen520 Senior Member

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  17. viseversa101

    viseversa101 Elite Member

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    smoke-nice work, keep it up
    evok- i guarantee sum1 will fight with u over that name eventually lol
    but nice so far none the less
     
  18. cocacola

    cocacola Senior Member

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  19. Zookyook

    Zookyook Elite Member

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    the little SIT 3d one is pretty nice man.... and i cant draw shit on a computer so the bottom one is nice to me! hah... just looks like u need to smooth the bars out, the lines and thicknesses are kinda shaky
     
  20. cocacola

    cocacola Senior Member

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    thanks man! and ok i do that!