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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. ghostwriter

    ghostwriter Senior Member

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    ai176.photobucket.com_albums_w188_sabe_2_sdrfghesrgserg.jpg
    delightfully boonker ( you look hot like fire)
     
  2. ghostwriter

    ghostwriter Senior Member

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    Ill fill keep bangin like a block
     
  3. ghostwriter

    ghostwriter Senior Member

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    sly i like the way the worrdddddds strech
     
  4. ghostwriter

    ghostwriter Senior Member

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    holdin the same style is harrdi allways have swirls whell bad lines
     
  5. ghostwriter

    ghostwriter Senior Member

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    i love this style nice first letter
     
  6. ghostwriter

    ghostwriter Senior Member

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    loooking more like my stee here
     
  7. "awesome"ONE

    "awesome"ONE Elite Member

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    can someone crit my peice please thx
     
  8. thepekins

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  9. "awesome"ONE

    "awesome"ONE Elite Member

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    i think your peice looks nice, what do you guys think about mine
     
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  10. "awesome"ONE

    "awesome"ONE Elite Member

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    im always blown away by your straight letters rewt, so precise nice and clean,also really like your concept you did with the face, nice shading

    trying out a new name chelseas16 lol. i dont know just playin around with names
     
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  11. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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  12. "awesome"ONE

    "awesome"ONE Elite Member

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    how about mine
     
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  13. thepekins

    thepekins Guest

    we cant see yours dawg

    Mogan- you think you could like crit it better lol "not very cool" doesnt really help me
     
  14. gecko36

    gecko36 New Member

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    nice and i really like the "S". Don't have much else to say
     
  15. gecko36

    gecko36 New Member

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    tht was for ghostwriter.
     
  16. Amends_Ego

    Amends_Ego Senior Member

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    you all need to learn how to fucking use the edit button instead of double posting. and ghost use the fucking multiple quote picture if you wanna fucking crit and post the flicks. As much as i love seeing all the pieces from the last 2 pages, I like to see them on the last two pages instead of in seperate posts on this page. 'awesome' post a fucking picture and crit the other pieces on THAT post and we'll leave you crits, fiending over crits multiple times w/ no pic (or even with a pic) is a waste of fucking time.

    Rewt- Always fresh, you been rockin that same steez since I can remember. Alot of dudes say that you need to step outta you're box and go more complex but I disagree, you kill it on your simps so no crits there. For the charc, the eyes dominate the face too much, try doing them smaller next time, also I think that more of the left side of her face should show with the angle that shes facing, could be wrong on that the lines are pretty light.

    Pekins-Im pretty sure I remember you from a little back, not sure if you were rocking somber then but the handy is pretty legit. I'm not feeling those letters, im guessing your trying to branch of from simps. iif so my advice is to work with way thicker bars, it'll give you more wiggle room. Overall its not bad definately got basic structure down but I think you might be moving a little too fast, drop the extensions fatten those bars and let you're letters flow naturally (the m looks way forced and doesn't look good at all.
     
  17. "awesome"ONE

    "awesome"ONE Elite Member

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    thepekins cool but add some things to the letters there boring

    ghostwritier start to use bars more cool olors but the name spit discusts me no diss
    heres one of mine crits appreciated thx
     
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  18. <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>

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  19. "awesome"ONE

    "awesome"ONE Elite Member

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    nice stuff guys
    i need some help being creative
     
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  20. BoomSlang

    BoomSlang Senior Member

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    awesome, you need more than a little help on just the creative side.
    first....congrats on actually posting a pic this time **applause**
    second, dont worry about being creative till you fix the basic shit first.
    your bar width is all over the place even down to having different sized bars in the same letter (M and second E)
    S looks like its been strangled in the middle
    O should be thicker all the way round.
    last E doesnt have a consistent bar in it.
    dont even bother with 3d till you fix up the structure.
    its just more to go wrong in an already bad piece
    3d crits
    A=long 3d on outside of letter,3d inside the middle is short and out of proportion
    W=bottom middle left should follow the angle of the bar it is the 3d of, yours goes straight up and down and is out of place
    first E= middle bar 3d does not follow the rest of the piece, there is no angle on it
    S=bottom 3d of the s starts in the middle of the letter instead of off to the right side where it should.
    O= wtf happened there, its just all wrong
    M=angle of the 3d does not match the rest of the piece
    second E is prolly the best bit of 3d on the entire piece

    not tryin to be a prick but you need to be able to see your own stuff objectively in order to improve