good looks bro. im not trying to die young

ill stick with ELDR.

that looks great bro.
only thing i can see, is make the bottom part of the mane a little more flowy.
but other than that great job.

 

MF JOKZ by JokzOner, on Flickr

 

Batman/Spartan/Elephant Hybrid.

 

^thats a mf doom elephant if im correct. not spartan
and its pre sick

 

posting a pic to feel cool. pretty shitty

 

you are indeed correct therefore the "MF JOKZ"

 

a few throw ideas, fuck that tag, it brought a tear to my eye, and not in a good way

 

^cool stuff man, with some polish I could see those throws being pretty tits.

 

mfdoom elephant is sick, that lion is on point
1st two pager i ever finished

i may go back and do the shading better but i cant use any more time on this i have other peices to finish

 

Criticize n shit

 

"M" extension needs to gtfo.

 

yeah M has been giving me some shit. not sure how to make it look good. i dont think my m in the last one is that bad but the second pic sucks.

 

How does summer fag have 93 credits? even if you made the extension on the "M" shoot to the right it would look alot better.

 

on that third one, take that zigzag and spiral part out and it would be dope, imo

 

Xist, your throws aren't bad but keep working on them. X's are tricky.

Nice page Rezume.

And this SKAM burns you Skeletor.
http://www.bombingscience.com/index.php/gallery/viewThumbs/artist/474/city/127/style/1

 

ya ive seen his shit. its alot better than me no doubt but hell its not like im gonna start havin beef with him, i just like to write skam. every god damn name is taken so fuck.

 

throws are soo much easier with paint and a fat cap,
going bombing tonight so ill do a few and post them for proper crits on what the syle actually looks like, but yeah, i dont normally do throws, i piece a lot more..

 

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What y'all think? Go critt^^^
REVNoner!

 

make the letters the same size close the hole on the e and push it out a bit more