Pover - your E is still messed lol. Kroe - I like ur throw .. though the style seems pretty common. I would suggest tweaking it up and try to put some personality into it.
About half way through the first throw it started pouring down rain so we had to book it under the nearest train lol. Didn't come out too bad for the conditions. The second one is a little whack but I figured I would still throw it up there just for kicks. Second time out painting. Any crits or tips? Sorry I can't resize on my phone.
HALO - well to start, never make excuses as to why it came out shitty. Most the time we wont believe you anyways. On top of that... People are going to see that and they won't know or care that it was raining. They will just see that what you left behind. Also don't hide under a train. That's just fucking stupid. I don't think you should even go to trainyards yet. You'll probly just heat them out for the people who actually know what their doing. If you do go there anyways don't leave your empty cans around. As for your throwups. They look like they are sagging. Don't make ur letters so droopy looking. Try nice round basic letters. Your A is the second throw up looks like a R. Practice on paper and show us ur best. We will tell u what u can fix and u will get better. Sketch as much as u can
I second all of the above, also as far as technique, if you're gonna do a dusty throwup, make it look intentional, your fill looks like a hybrid between dusty and clean/full so it just looks rushed and frantically scribbled in, also if your force field cuts into your outline then take that initial color and go over and fix it, just makes for a cleaner looking throw, but like kush said,it doesn't seem like your ready to paint quite yet,just get inspired and work magic with paper, get feedback, improve, get more feedback, then after some final tweaks you might be ready to practice can control on a wooden board or something, Rome wasn't built in a day and there's nothing wrong with taking time to develop , sorry for all the talk, I'm high as shit, that's just my 2 cents
backalley i think u make ur letters too tall and skinny. i would beef em up a bit, i dont even know what it says lol here is some throws
backalley-dont look up graffiti fonts on google learn your own letters. kush - nice simple throw your e still gets me tho norf- when I grow up I wanna bomb like you !! nice 2 letter man
The cake is a lie... Good shit man. I think you should do a capital R to go with that K, which is sexy btw. And double over your lines when you dont got a fatcap, it helps so much.
word ill do that the lowecase is just super easy lol .... jacked your lil u thing for my p nobody is doing it out here and I dig it
Okay thanks for the crit. And just for the record, we weren't painting the trains. Not nearly good enough for that yet. Here is an idea I have been tossing around.