Its a B, fine sir.

 

Oh, not, not you dude.
Haha, I meant that shit Dank posted.
I don't really like the things on the top left of your Es, though.
I think that your Es would actually look a lot better without them

 

not dont but what u think
and your b looks like a r hommie

 

Haha. Yea, I realized after I posted it. Thanks for the crits though.

 

That K...

 

backbone to tall..k

 

That K is the only good letter on the whole canvas, haha.

For real though, I'm not digging any of the other letters, They are too disproportionate.

 

I like the S the best lol

 

now all i need is 4 more people to like the a the r and two people to like each c and i can fuse thoses 6 people together to make one person that likes it

im fuckin so happy rainbows are flyin out my ass

 

MOAR LULZ

 

crits?

 

give crits to get them
all i say is
USE BARS
CHANGE COLOUR SCHEME
TIDY IT UP
HIGHLIGHTS OR INLINE MIGHT SAVE THIS PIECE

 

trying to do something with the letters




flask- i like the overall piece but not the letters. s is the best

 

Wtf did you do to those bars?
take off all those sharp warts on those letters and you'll be fine (The bottom one).
the top on is gey, mainly because of those random bar extensions (idk if i'd even classify those as extensions)...

 

ignore them lol, i didnt realise how bad they are im workin on something now and il post it later

 

try taking a peek in the picture gallery (Big Boy threaads) and see how they mess with extensions n' shit. however, i'd only suggest messing with those extensions until you can make a CLEAN simp.
cause trust me, Bad structure+extensions= Eyes Vomiting.

 

hows this

 

bad, make your bars even, if you're using them.......
3D is weird too.
look for a 3D tutorial thread on here, i think it's in the the Tool's n' tips forum. shit helped me with my 3D.

 

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