^^^ dude you get a whole week to work on it...you ever think you might be losing because your doing your piece in 5 minutes?
...have issues with colours... crayola aint the best ya know ...the "re" is the weakest part on my opinion View attachment 582619
Okay here's mine... second E looks weak, maybe cuz of the 1 point vanishing... oh well. still happy with this overall. [Broken External Image]:http://a.imageshack.us/img529/8286/getattachmentaspx1f.jpg
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Not bad. The serifs are hard for me to get into. The piece needs to be leveled, don't be afraid to use a ruler. But again, not bad.
seriously? wow thanks man... I just threw this up in 5mins only for the heck of participating =\ I apreciate it
Yeah, I can tell it's a quick jammer. The color choice can be altered so you're working with more contrast. You kind of have a dark fill with a dark drop. But the blue-orange complimentary combo isn't a bad start to work with (like you have here). And yeah, just generally clean up your lines and the structure. But definitely a good start. Worlds better than the Deism battle. However, I will say your Blaize entry is a lot stronger than this one.